jyh
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
First chapter of a fantasy story. (got enough)
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
The first 2 chapters of a novel I've been working on. 2.7k words
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Overlong prologue for a potential Fantasy/Adventure novel
Denton Fihnn
In: Short Story 4 reviews
Death is greedy and her hunger can lead her to unemployment as she bets with her peers.
Bryan Eskew
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A child listens to the story of a man searching his life for meaning. Worlds are created, some people die, others grow up.
Jose F. Diaz
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Prince Inveigle is given an ultimatum and must find a way to make it happen as well as keep himself happy. First ten pages of a novel in progress. Only 2,700 words.
bohemianonrye
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A fractured fairy tale about dragons and princesses and what it means to give up on living happily ever after.
Matthew James
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
The first 2 chapters of my first book. It tells of a girl who is befriended by a stuffed rabbit after her mother dies suddenly. And the journey the two take to rescue her mother from her own hell.
Dave Chadwick
In: Flash Fiction 6 reviews
An outline for a possible new Oz story.
simon morris
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A man relates a story from his distant past. He tells of his confrontation with an urban legend
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A reluctant soldier's first mission outside of his homeland. Revised for a higher level of character development in the prologue and first chapter—hopefully!
carol
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A servant boy learns a bit of alchemy on his own for fun and profit, though not without getting into trouble for inadvertently poisoning a town. Young adult reading level, over 10,000 words.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
Men are pack animals by nature; so when vast packs of wolf-like creatures invade the southeastern US, might some men actually join these packs? More importantly: who controls these invaders?