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Humboldt Lycanthrope from California is reading Sing, Unburied, Sing September 24, 2015 - 10:00am
Spider Clown
67% (4 votes)
Phobias
33% (2 votes)
Total votes: 6

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dollface993 from Detroit is reading As many craft essays as I can find September 24, 2015 - 12:47pm

This was a hard one. I don't know what I'm saying, I've never voted. But both of these stories were very good. I could tell who wrote what. That's unavoidable if you are familiar with someone's work.

While Spider Clown was so scary with the bad trip, also very heartwarming, Phobias was a very well put together piece of work too. What decided for me was the two endings. Phobias was very climatic, and had the great twist. I always love a twist. Spider Clown was a great story, but I just didn't get that same payoff at the end like I did with Phobias.

It really didn't help that I have Arachnephobia, but it did make the scary parts that much scarier. The spider in Phobias reminded me of The Twilight Zone, The one episode with the giant spider.

Excellent job both of you!

I wish you both could have won.

 

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Humboldt Lycanthrope from California is reading Sing, Unburied, Sing September 24, 2015 - 3:58pm

Yup, I somehow fucked up and posted this three times. If anyone voted on one of the pages that got deleted please come cast your vote here. Ooops.

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Humboldt Lycanthrope from California is reading Sing, Unburied, Sing September 28, 2015 - 2:50pm

Bump

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Jimothy Scott from Canada is reading The Anatomy of Story by John Truby September 29, 2015 - 7:21pm

Nearing the close. Get your votes in. 

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Humboldt Lycanthrope from California is reading Sing, Unburied, Sing October 1, 2015 - 11:02am

Well, that's it. The winner is Spider Clown by Humboldt Lycanthrope. Thanks to everyone who voted.

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Jimothy Scott from Canada is reading The Anatomy of Story by John Truby October 9, 2015 - 8:01pm

I maintain that Humboldt had an unfair advantage by using performance enhancing drugs

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Jimothy Scott from Canada is reading The Anatomy of Story by John Truby October 9, 2015 - 8:02pm

jk

 

good game

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dollface993 from Detroit is reading As many craft essays as I can find October 25, 2015 - 2:22pm

Lol, that's great. Those must've been some really good drugs though!