Ask the Agent: Erotic Zombie Thrillers! And More

Navigating the rough terrain of today’s publishing industry shouldn’t be a solo event. This week in Ask the Agent, I’ll explore and dissect a few of the industry’s mysteries, straight from the shoulder.

Question from Julie

I am currently working on a zombie MS.  I've read that if an agent currently has a client with a published book (in my case, a zombie one), they are unlikely to represent another one.  So my question is: should I avoid submitting to agents who already represent a book of this sub-genre?

And would you classify a zombie novel as horror/thriller?

Last one I promise:  should I mention in the query that the MS includes some erotic scenes?

Are you pitching an erotic zombie thriller?!?! Send it to me!

Okay here’s the deal, no agent wants to be pigeonholed as the “ghost story agent” or the “celebrity memoir agent” or the “zombie agent” because we want to make sure that writers are sending us a wide variety of manuscripts.

But when it comes right down to it, if the manuscript is fantastic, we don’t care if we just sold one in the same genre! We care about the quality of the content. Now, we may realize the oversaturation of such a subject and be wary on that account, but having represented and sold the same sub-genre in the past isn’t really going to kill your chances.

Having said that, no agent wants two of their books to compete with each other. So make sure that the subject matter is different. For example, going along with the zombie theme: Warm Bodies by Isaac Marion and the Benny Imura series by Jonathan Maberry are both zombie books but are worlds apart in content. If your zombie book is JUST like the one said agent has sold, they probably won’t take it on because of the competition factor. But hey, it never hurts to query and try, yea?

As for the horror/thriller question, that all depends on the plot. I can’t answer that for you. Zombies are often used as comedic tools ...and in the case of Warm Bodies, a romantic tool. So if you are using them as terrifying, flesh eating, brainless cannibals… and the rest of your manuscript has a horror vibe, then the answer is yes. But just because a certain subject matter can or should be scary, doesn’t mean it always is. ::cough cough:: Shaun of the Dead ::cough cough::

Pro tip: If it’s an erotica, say so. If it has one sexy scene, don’t bother mentioning it in the query. But if you feel the erotic scenes are crucial enough, you should probably label your manuscript an “erotic paranormal thriller” or at least a “paranormal romance.”

Question from Stephanie

I was wondering about nudging an agent with an offer of representation from another agent.

Should all agents having materials (from query to MS) be nudged? How long should agents be given to respond?
 If an agent doesn't respond to the offer of representation nudge, should it be assumed they are passing?

Once you have received an offer of representation from an agent, immediately send an email to all the agents considering your manuscript and let them know. So what I’m saying is, if an agent has your manuscript, then you absolutely need to let them know of your pending offer. It’s up to you whether or not you want to let an agent who only has your query letter know about your offer. I’ve had plenty of queries in my slush that I’ve plucked out and asked to see the MS because I was notified of an offer. But I've also had queries in my slush that I've trashed once I found out there was an offer... it's called bowing out. So it’s completely up to you on the latter. But as for the former, you must let the agent know. It’s very poor form to do otherwise.

An acceptable amount of time to give agents to read your MS after you’ve received an offer is a week. Anything less is a little rough, and anything more is way rough on the first agent who offered. Truth is, we can read a manuscript and know if we want to offer on it in less than a day. But we may have a very busy few days, so a week is the norm and perfectly acceptable.

If you never hear back from the nudge, count them out.

Pro tip: Be considerate. That’s what it comes down to. I have sent out responses to queries, so excited to read the MS, only to find out they have already accepted representation elsewhere. It’s a bummer and agents always want a fair shot. So nudges in this case are always very lovely.

Question from Adam

Many LitReactor members were lured here by Chuck Palahniuk's 36 writing essays because they are fans of his work, which many classify as transgressive. However, according to articles on this site and elsewhere, transgressive novels don't sell. In fact, many agents won't even look at them. Is there a better word(s) aspiring novelists of this genre can use to find an appropriate agent, or is it best to just suck it up and write a young adult crime story?

I might as well start off by saying that I represent transgressive fiction. I also don’t really buy this claim that agent’s won’t look at transgressive fiction. I will be honest with you and say that there has not been a lot of young adult transgressive fiction. Maybe The Perks of Being a Wallflower, but when that book was first published, “young adult fiction” barely existed. However, the amount of adult best selling transgressive fiction is vast.

If you are trying to pitch a YA transgressive fiction and agents are getting caught up on that word, just call it literary fiction. It’s not a lie. Transgressive is a form of literary. And then the agent can decide for him/herself whether or not they want to represent it without having a preconceived notion that oh crap, this might not sell because it is transgressive.

Pro tip: Sometimes you have to massage the truth a bit. Don’t lie. But find other ways to phrase things.

Thank your for all the wonderful questions this week. "Be well, do good work, and keep in touch" -Garrison Keillor

Have a question about the publishing industry? I would love to discuss the specifics of researching and querying agents, finding the right agent, proper publishing etiquette, how to go from idea to completed manuscript, marketing yourself, social media for writers, and anything else you can think of! I am now taking questions for Issue 12 of Ask the Agent. Issue 12 answers will be posted Monday, December 10th.

Bree Ogden

Column by Bree Ogden

Bree Ogden is a literary agent at Red Sofa Literary and a comics/TV columnist and reviewer at Bloody Disgusting.

When she's not agenting, compulsively watching horror films, reading comics, hiding out at her local science center, or killing off her bee colonies, she serves as the managing editor of the macabre children's magazine Underneath the Juniper Tree, which she co-founded in 2011 with artist Rebekah Joy Plett.

Bree teaches query craft and graphic novel scripting at LitReactor as well as serves as the Assistant Class Director. Unless you are an exciting new piece of taxidermy, she'll probably never let you in her room. You can find her at

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GaryP from Denver is reading a bit of this and that November 26, 2012 - 9:56am

Always enjoy reading this column!