6 Tips on Reading to Train the Writer's Eye

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One of the most often repeated lessons for writers is the importance of reading. As Stephen King put it, "If you don't have time to read, you don't have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that." However, reading alone is not enough. If you want to read in a way that trains your writer's eye, active engagement is required. Here are some tips for maximizing your learning during the reading process.

1. Approach with a pen.

Any man who reads too much and uses his own brain too little falls into lazy habits of thinking.
~Albert Einstein

The more you engage with a text, the better you'll learn from it. As such, any time you want to read "seriously" (i.e., not just to unwind) a pen and highlighter should be a part of your reading process. Beyond helping you engage, this approach allows you to quickly return to segments of the piece that impressed or bothered you. Whether you're giving yourself a refresher course on the book, writing an essay, or idly thumbing through the pages, these highlights make for valuable road signs.

I myself prefer to read on Kindle largely because it makes my note-taking process simpler. However, electronic mediums have definite drawbacks; I can't annotate with lines and circles, can't double- or triple-underline something, etc. So while I encourage the technophiles among you to consider the Kindle, there are definitely benefits to using the standard pen-and-highlighter approach.

2. Be critical.

'Classic': a book which people praise and don't read.
~Mark Twain

If you approach a well-reputed piece looking to learn from its (already assumed) superior quality, you're hindering yourself. No writer is flawless. Many writing choices come down to value exchanges; clarity will be sacrificed for lyricism, realism for emotional power, directness for detail. Identifying the value choices that don't work for you—or ways that a text simply falls short—can help you affirm your values and find your voice.

Whether you're reading a time-tested classic or a piece of pop-culture garbage, be honest with yourself about what you like and don't like—and take it to the crucial next step: Examine why it is you don't like it. Identify the specific passages, paragraphs, choices, and plot arcs that grated on you. When you do so, even a piece you hate can be a valuable learning experience.

3. Dissect parts of the story that work for you.

Easy reading is damn hard writing.
~Nathaniel Hawthorne

A book is best read a holistic piece. After that initial reading, however, you can learn a great deal from dissection. For example, if you found that the writer balanced a variety of sub-plots in a way that worked well for you, sketch out a diagram on how much time was devoted to each sub-plot, how those plots were rotated, and any other factors you noted.

Here's one example of a dissection I've done. I was impressed by how Suzanne Collins created a rich sensory experience and gradually introduced setting, characters, and suspense in the first chapter of The Hunger Games. I went through and noted how she used sensory details and the rate at which she shifted between plot action and exposition. (I also noted her abundant cliches—but that's a different dissection.)

This made it easy to see Collins' (conscious or unconscious) strategy: She switches back and forth between action and exposition, and any lengthy exposition is followed by equally lengthy action or dialogue. Each action is paired with a sensory detail, and all five core senses (sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell) are brought in by the end of paragraph 19. The suspense is developed gradually, with roughly half of the first 20 paragraphs implying the danger of District 12, the woods, or the world.

4. Talk to someone about the piece.

We read to know that we are not alone.
~C.S. Lewis

One of the benefits of studying literature in a book club or college classroom is that you have the chance to talk about the piece with a group. This gives you insight into different responses/observations and ingrains your experience of the story. Don't have a classroom or book club? Talk to a friend about the piece, find a forum discussing the work, or leave a thorough review online.

I find this strategy to be especially useful if I'm talking to someone who hates a book I liked or liked a book I hated; it's valuable to borrow their eyes to see the story from a different perspective.

5. Do some post-reading research.

The life of the text [...] always develops on the boundary between two consciousnesses, two subjects. [...] This discourse enters into the dialogic fabric of human life, into the world symposium.
~Mikhail Bakhtin

While research into the author can be a fun way to gain insight into a piece, one of the most valuable types of research you can do is into the book's critical reception. I generally look to the Good Reads and Amazon reviews, but there are practically endless resources for getting a sense of how a book was received.

Of course, not all books will be reviewed with equal fairness. Established authors may be getting the majority of their reviews from a specific type of reader, giving you only a narrow window of insight. Don't approach the critical reception of a piece as being an absolute reflection of "how audiences respond," and remember that you don't have to write for the same audience. That said, this sort of research can help you gain some contextual framing for the piece and help build a general sense of how today's "reading audience" responds to different styles and strengths.

6. Read it again.

If one cannot enjoy reading a book over and over again, there is no use in reading it at all.
~Oscar Wilde

If you liked a book, read it again. This will allow you to see how plot moves were foreshadowed, how early passages helped prepare for latter ones, and what specific tools were used to create the emotions, movements, and structure of the piece. Further, since you will no longer be vulnerable to suspense-based ploys, you can get a clearer vision of the writing's quality at the micro level.

If a book works well for me, I'll read it two or three times. During my first read, I make observations but set aside any major dissection or critical analysis; the goal is a raw reading experience unskewed by overthinking. During the second round, I'll read from the perspective of a writer, critically dissecting almost every part of the work in question.

Being a writer requires being a reader, but a given book can be either a blip or a boon in the development of your craft. These six strategies have helped immensely as I've worked toward becoming a more effective reader and writer. I hope they prove helpful to you in achieving those same objectives.

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Column by Robbie Blair

Robbie Blair is a world-wandering author and poet who blogs about his adventures, the writing craft, and more. He was doomed to write when, at just three years old, his English-professor father taught him the "To be or not to be" soliloquy. Robbie has since published more than a dozen creative pieces in literary journals (including Touchstones, Enormous Rooms, Warp + Weave, and V Magazine). Robbie Blair's website is loaded with travel narratives; original creative work;  writerly humor; pretty pictures; writing games, lessons, tips, and exercises; and other uber-nifty™ content.

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dufrescm's picture
dufrescm from Wisconsin is reading Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep April 17, 2013 - 1:11pm

Thanks, Rob!  I really enjoyed this. When I was at university, all of my literature classes tried to teach us to do this very thing, but I was never very good at it back then. Nowadays, I can't stop reading with my "writer's eye", lol.  

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Michael Crame April 17, 2013 - 4:32pm

Great article. Really enjoyed the dissection and post reading research suggestions. Definitely going to go back to some of my favorite and not so favorite reads and apply. I also found Francine Prose's book "Reading Like A Writer" full of good material on this type of "deep reading". Here's a link to a summary of her book if anyone's curious:

http://books.google.com/books/about/Reading_Like_a_Writer.html?id=X99xtQ...

 

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Robbie Blair from lots of places is reading a whole stack of books April 18, 2013 - 6:42am

@dufrescm: It's definitely one I've developed gradually. I used to have a fear similar to that of someone who posted on this article when it was shared on Facebook: "Deface my books, I don't think so." What helped me overcome that was actually the Kindle. After making the transition on eBooks (where you could hide the scribbles in just a couple taps!), I realized that I couldn't stop making notations. Reading without some way to put down my thoughts makes me feel like my reading only counted as reading because of a technicality.

My solution was a space pen, which I always have with me. When circumstances are ideal, though, I've also got my my red pen and an orange highlighter equipped too.

@Michael: Fantastic. I've added it to my wish list.

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SammyB from Las Vegas is reading currently too many to list April 17, 2013 - 11:28pm

I still have trouble writing in books, but it is something you have to do. This has been a bit of an issue for me because a) I majored in English, and was told to do this for five years, and b) I now teach English to high schoolers. I use removable tabs and sticky notes to write my thoughts into the newer books and textbooks. Then I just leave them there for reference as I teach. If I have a used copy of a book I will write in it. If I bought it for one cent on Amazon it is usually damaged, so I do not feel bad when I highlight and make notes in the text. A book that I paid $10-$25 for is another story. It hurts to write in such a shiny new book. I have a Kindle, so I am thinking of taking your advice and switching over for teaching purposes. It would be so much easier than the tabs and post-it system.

Thanks, Rob, I always love your articles.

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iambrendabren from Southern California is reading The Stand by Stephen King December 5, 2014 - 4:45pm

Loved this article. Moved it to my Favorites. 2015 may be my re-reading year.

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Annita708 February 11, 2017 - 8:33am

Enjoyed reading your article, you have many useful tips and ideas, that's very important for a writer. I understand how important it is to be a good reader if you want to become a successful writer. Thank you.

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