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Critique This Story and Earn 12 Points

By Kedzie


Wait, what? YUP. Critique this story and earn 12 pts. How, you say? Easy-Peasy. Instructions inside. Read story BEFORE reading reviews. There are several plot twists and the reviews contain spoilers.

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