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In: Novel Excerpt 16 reviews
Chapter from my novella in progress titled Snow Birds. I renamed this chapter for anthology purposes.
Michael Cavanaugh
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The second chapter of a memoir I am very slowly writing about my school year in Russia. This covers my exodus to Ulyanovsk, where I spent most of the time. ~5400 Words
carol
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
After being struck by lightning, Larry suddenly has almost uncontrollably destructive powers. He finds others like himself, and together they create a wormhole and travel to unknown places.
marv66
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First 4 chapters of my novel Angels & Guns. 3,817 Words
J.T. Barnett
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Three high school grads travel to South America for the summer in search of freedom. Through drugs and alcohol they may find the edge in their perceptions of the world.
simon morris
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
The prelude introduced the plot line through a character, chapter 1 introduces the protagonist, his fiance and some back story I felt the reader should know
aliensoul77
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A young man obsessed with an author stalks him and tries to reenact scenes from his own book with him.
Dave Hanson
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Time to kill some children. 1,200 words.
Instag8r
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After taking all of your incredible feedback into consideration, here is the rewrite of Starling: Open Wounds that I posted a few days ago.
Typewriter Demigod
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The relationships and romances of four girls in a high school in Devon
simon morris
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A prescient 14-year-old girl is confined to a children's institution for a brutal crime she claims not to have committed. Her only hope is a famous psychologist who she read about in the newspaper.
N.L. Vaught
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Expatriate Connor returns to find his fellow exile, Marcia, unconscious and possibly dead. Hunger and delirium begin to take their toll. 1847 words.
Instag8r
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
The prologue to a novel that I am currently writing. It's about an FBI agent on the rebound and a serial killer returning from the past to cause terror and inflict more damage. (1660 words)
ergoego
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2nd chapter of a novel. Stan looks for forgiveness at a religious revival. Flashbacks at an army camp, on a raft in the MIssissippi, in San Francisco reveal how Stan developed guilt.
pinkpowR
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Everyone knows that sex sells but a simple tease can be as lucrative without the psychological ramifications and physiological risk, right?
Dave Hanson
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Chapter 6. Keltner tries not kill his recruiter. 2500 words.
R A Dilts
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
A terminally ill cancer patient and a brain damaged bookie with no short term memory plot to rob a corpse from below a bank in Times Square. A love story.
Dave Hanson
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Michael Keltner returns from Iraq to discover he's misplaced his empathy. He ends up on a strange journey through 'normal' life trying to find it. Sex, drugs, violence and morality.
jdudley
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A reluctant soldier's first mission outside of his homeland. Revised for a higher level of character development in the prologue and first chapter—hopefully!
J.S. Wright
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
A man's moments of reflection after spending the night in a stranger's hotel room, out in the middle of nowhere.
Michael Combs
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
A dark, yet playful comedy about an evangelical pastor who struggles with his faith and sexuality.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
Men are pack animals by nature; so when vast packs of wolf-like creatures invade the southeastern US, might some men actually join these packs? More importantly: who controls these invaders?
Typewriter Demigod
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
A girl goes to school dressed as a boy. Better than it sounds. About 4,000 words.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
"O Jesus" is the first chapter of a 42 chaptered novel. It sets the stage for the type of protagonist you're dealing with. It gives a hint of what his ambitions for his sons might be
Tripp C
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The first 2 chapters of my book, Wild Oats. It's a somewhat fictional perspective on Generation-X. It's just under 5,000 words and I simply need to know if it draws the reader in. Criticism is loved