Jeremy Bustin
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
COLOR ME CRAZY is the account of a schizophrenic patient whom suffers from ombrophobia, the fear of rain or being rained upon. There are two things that set Patrick off--rain and the color red.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
In the previous chapter a Jesuit had counseled Stan to go find a good Catholic girl, get married and dedicate his 1st born son to be a priest. Stan visits his aunt in Savanna & meets Holly at church.
Praxus
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
This is the first chapter of a standard mystery novel with a detective, sidekick, and a MacGuffin. Everyone is introduced.
Dwayne
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
How does this work as a intro to an alternative history book? 2369 words
Matt Attack
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
This submission has been removed. Still in progress, but have everything I need. Thanks again for looking!
Typewriter Demigod
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Love, honour and violence in high school. 6.5k words.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Overlong prologue for a potential Fantasy/Adventure novel
rightcharlee
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Faith, trust, and some experimental pixie dust (2,150 words).
Typewriter Demigod
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Girls in love in highschool in Devon.
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Seth awakes in the early morning of the hotel. With a hardcore hangover, he forces himself to find his buddy Rob to leave. But Rob isn't the only thing he find, San Diego is overrun with Zombies
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Slacker Seth Walsh wakes up to a call from his exe. After she pisses him off he decides to join a friend at a hotel party. Everything is going great until Seth finds out his drink has been spiked.
Nick Wilczynski
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The second section of my novel. Also a little more than 5,000 words. Please read Section 1 first.
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
INFAMY follows a self-absorbed slacker who becomes city tour guild for a drug lord, but not until after finding a baby. This trio makes for the perfect storm mixed up in a zombie filled San Diego
Nick Wilczynski
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Upright Citizens is a novel set in ghost town America, 2009. The opening section here is a little more than 5,000 words.
Dave
In: Novel Excerpt 11 reviews
In a three act structure, this is winding down Act 2. Protagonist is a cop who has fallen from grace. 1400 Words
JRNutt
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A group of people, living their lives.
Christopher Jar...
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A strange dream that starts off an adventure of angry drunkenness across country.
Jose F. Diaz
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Prince Inveigle is given an ultimatum and must find a way to make it happen as well as keep himself happy. First ten pages of a novel in progress. Only 2,700 words.
RachelJacobsen
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
A woman begins to question the meaning and purpose of her life, as she tries to find the reasons for her unhappiness, and she stumbles upon an aspect of herself that existed all along.
jradamski
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
How To Do Drugs is a fictional memoir of love, loss, and recreational drug use. The protagonist is a psychedelic tour guide for wealthy clients. The book chronicles his fall into drug use. 7,200 words
Chris Davis
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
My first attempt at a first chapter for a book about a suicidal man in a world where heroes exist, and the troubles he finds when trying to end it all
whatdoiknow
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
This is the first four chapters of the true story of how I was currupted in college. I changed the names due to illicit activity.
Silent Kim
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Odette in her early thirties, is pretty, smart and satisfied with her life style. She had a loveless up bring, that inspired her to only have affairs of lust and omit love from the equation. Until...
Ches Smith
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A scribe in an ancient alien society is just arriving at his new temple assignment. He gets a cold reception there, but comes face to face with his messiah.
Tyler Durden
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
This is my second posting of this prologue. It's the beginning to a story about the tragic destruction of a once happy family.