Nick Wilczynski
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
4,200 words.
David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
After tracking a gargantuan, Thompson and Three discover that their "game" is far to dangerous to pursue any further.
HPierce
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Slacker or artist. Underachieving Arkansas white trash or nomadic daydreamer. Names given me and the more likable epithets I prefer. There is a dry world around me and I hold the matches.
swordfighter
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Travis is looking to find his mom before she is killed his girlfriend and her uncle is helping him Travis and his mom do not have a good relationship he loves her but she does not love him. 1299 words
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Stan attempts to publicly promise his son Ambrose to become a Jesuit priest during the infant's baptism.
FoxyLenz
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Cyrus has a nightmare that forces him to relive his dark past...
FoxyLenz
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Fixed the issues with the prologue added some stuff, just fyi for anyone interested
pkanom
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
First person intro to a novel -- setting my main character's mindframe. It's a story about a cynical, burnout humanitarian trying to make sense of how he got there.
FoxyLenz
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
Lilly's husband returns from war, well at least most of him does...
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Stan and Holly await the birth of their firstborn. They live on Rangeview Ave. in the Highland Park section of Los Angeles. Incidentally where Diane Keaton grew . Her grandmother lived on Rangeview.
FoxyLenz
In: Novel Excerpt 8 reviews
After her mother reveals a terrible secret,Lilly Rae, 15, runs away and then eventually eats some pancakes. This is the stuff that happens in between bad news and a good breakfast.
Wayne Rutherford
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Rikki is a rock star at the tail end of a long and tumultuous career. Never one to back away from controversy, Rikki is ready to go out with a bang.
rone1986
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A woman looses her unborn child in a motor accident. Receiving no support from her absentee husband or her family, she deals with her overwhelming guilt and depression by employing sex as a punishment
David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An introduction to a very large world where the reader is introduced to two hunters (not too much is revealed about them), but through their experiences you are introduced to a post apocalyptic world!
jyh
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
First chapter of a fantasy story. (got enough)
Devon Robbins
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Rough first chapter of a psychological/horror novel I'm working on. Sarah is a woman that has been haunted since she was a kid. Her paranoia is getting worse. She can't define the lines of reality.
Stephen
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Chapter one of the novel Heroic
David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An opening chapter of a longer piece, where we learn of a horrifying secret about Mia Woolfe's past. Strangeness is foreshadowed. And just what is this "connection?" Hope you enjoy it.
Pushpaw
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Edward's life is boring, useless and weird. Here's some of it.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
The first 2 chapters of a novel I've been working on. 2.7k words
ashleyarabian
In: Novel Excerpt 10 reviews
This is the first couple chapters of my first novel. The novel is about a 15 year old girl who obtains a stalking habit for a music teacher 2X her age. It's a coming of age/sexual awakening story.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
In the previous chapter Stan discovers an electricity between him and Holly, but Holly's best friend Chloe creates a dilemma for Stan. This chapter finds Stan dealing with his dilemma. 3,222 words.
Courtney
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
underpurplemoon
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
George Boardway has been in love with Deanne for quite some time. Deanne is a single mom who happens to be a sushi chef. He finally tells her. This is just a prologue.
Tim Barker
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
It's about a man who has tried, and failed, to commit suicide 136 times. The book is called 137. This section is 1780 words and it's a black absurd comedy.