Stratton
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
I've reworked the opening chapters from my multiple POV manuscript. Chapter 1 POV is a 19 year old with Aspergers. Chapter 2 is a slutty 40 year old.
neojonez
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Luke is a novel about crime, sex and violence and other hobbies popular in and around Las Vegas. 2,800 words.
Michael Gleich
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
A family of witches own a successful organic winery in Sonoma. In these first two chapters, the main characters are brought out. Morty will play an important role later on. W.C. 3,747
Dave Hanson
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
Jeremiah Wolfe is a mercenary in a near future, and has just agreed to the job of his life.
skipstonePI
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
First chapter of a novel.
Angel Colón
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
A cranky old man, Arthur Graves, watches a little television, heats up leftovers and internalizes the frustrations of age on the night he dies.
Flybywrite
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
After learning of his wife’s third pregnancy, a failing horror writer Owen St. Croix hallucinates a trio of crows have become his mentors and that he is destined to write the horror of the century.
Stratton
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
This excerpt introduces Mona, the promiscuous 39 year old seeking away to better the world in her own way.
rightcharlee
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
In love with his younger sister, a boy celebrates his graduation with the family when a curious telephone call comes in (3,000 words)
travel_girl
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
First 2500 words of a YA novel I'm writing. Set in East Texas. Farms and bonfires and dancing and whiskey and good ol' country drama.
Tom1960
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
At the end of her first day at her new job Jill has an adventure in a bus station.
lspieller
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is chapter 17 of my YA novel. I'd love to hear whatever feedback you have, but im particularly interested in characterization.
Eden Dalia
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Tom1960
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
While doing their weekly laundry Alison and Kenny meet a mysterious couple. Something from Alison's past is revealed.
pkanom
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Marcus deals with the prospect of death as all hell breaks lose and the Nihil Batallion invades his compound.
Eden Dalia
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Stratton
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
This book has written from two points of view. This is the introduction to Reade, a 19 year old with a yet-to-be disclosed psych disorder who contributes to society in an unusual way.
Tom1960
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is a revision of chapter six. Alison recounts her last day at her regular job. She plays a prank on the wrong person and suffers the consequences.
pkanom
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An early chapter giving a general description of characters and general conflict on my book project. It focuses' on an otherwise common morning for the main character, showing a bit of his worldview.
lspieller
In: Novel Excerpt 8 reviews
Sixteen year old Carly has a hard time juggling family life and her personal life when she finds out that she's not *EXACTLY* human.
Courtney
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
Stratton
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
A hard-edged 39 year old with a reputation of running through men, has been surprisingly wooed by a mysterious new man, so much so that she has accepted his marriage proposal after just 2 months.
ten2two
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
SlowTime (just the working title) is the story of Stephen, a man who is afraid to move forward with his life. This hesitation begins to show itself in a very literal way.
qwrules
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
1941. In a world not too different from ours, a horrified woman witnesses the Americans bomb Pearl Harbour. The story then flashes back four years to begin to tell the story of this terrible event.