Robert Sims
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The intro to a hopeful novel. Feel free to do partial reviews as it is a little longer.
James Parr
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Samira Chen never expected to be a passenger on a spaceship. But she was one, and the Pandora was one unlucky ship. When she ship is destroyed, Samira is one of the only survivors.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Rebecca plays the piano for her math tutor.
markjoliver
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
These are the first two chapters of a novel. A young surfer from England is transported to a galaxy on the other side of the universe. A story of adventure, love, friendship, war and surfing.
craft_fear
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An Introduction by the story's author- a Los Angeles crime-writer investigating an anonymous video of a bone-pit in a small Californian town.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Rebecca works up the courage to tell James the truth.
Michael.Eric.Snyder
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
This is the next scene in the story I'm writing. Not too long, but hopefully engaging. The previous excerpt is a dozen or so stories back, if you wish to take a gander, for context.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
After a bad fall, Saira takes a day to recouperate. Conversations between her and her housemates as Gregor passes the buck. Chapter 4.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
James has something important to tell Rebecca.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Chapter three: Saira and Duggan are interrupted by some interesting characters. The walk home is a challenge for Saira, who is apprehensive about facing her housemates after her accident.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Saira and Duggan head out to go fishing, with disastrous consequences. Bodily injury results. Set in a rural landscape under subtle militant rule.
Richard Camelot
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
This submission is the first two chapters of a Novel I have yet to complete/edit. Basically, two young men addled with substance abuse tendencies set their sights on becoming Ironmen Tri-athletes.
Ivy Cain
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
This is the first chapter of the novel I'm currently working on. I'm about 1/3 of the way through and I'm not sure whether it's gong to fall into the thriller or horror genre yet.
Michael.Eric.Snyder
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
For those of you who were doubtless waiting with bated breath, this is the spawn of the battle that never was, between JR and me. This would be the SECOND spawn, the one with no Bleeds and no fire.
mamckeown
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A historical romance inspired by three men: the Headless Horseman (Sleepy Hollow) , The Patriot (a 2000 film), and Zorro.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
In which Sarah wakes up, and we are introduced to the main characters of the story. It is a busy time for the household, where each activity must have a purpose.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
Rebecca has learned the real reason behind her mother's hatred for her boyfriend.
David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
In a city called Necropolis, located miles below CA's Death Valley, a mother faces the repeated murder of her daughter, and there is nothing she can do to stop it.
ronin356
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A Sword and Sorcery novel in the viewpoint of Kallien's love interest. They are trying to get two dragons together to make an offspring. This offspring will be used as a weapon.
Smcdo546
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
The first four chapters of a Modern Fantasy Novel; with the main characters: Daniel Hickory, Lisa Glosner, and Eugene Daedalus. Not much obvious fantasy in it, at first.
whiteliz
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A young girl discovers an Irishman's (boy, really, he's only 17) beat-up journal from 1916 and (with some hesitation) begins reading it.
MG
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the opening paragraph of my novel. It's an offbeat tragic love story told through a narrator writing to his estranged child.
katiedoyle
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
The first 4 chapters of a young adult/new adult-ish novel I'm working on. It's about two people who are in transitional parts of their life and how they end up helping each other change.
Colton Adrian
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Just a few words from a longer piece I'm working on. Curious to see what anyone thinks! Thank you! P.S. I never know what genre, what would you say?
Lastpriority
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
When Kay is confronted by an intruder in the city, he finds she is linked to his past.