Midnight Climber (Draft 2) - UNDER REVISION - PLEASE HOLD ON REVIEWS FOR FINAL VERSION (4,200 words)
Chacron
The opening of my novel 'Shadow's Talent,' in which the protagonist, unable to sleep, climbs a tree in the middle of the night. The view isn't quite what he's expecting.
PatManhattan
His corporate employers make a suspicious offer to a young chemist...
V.R.Stone
So this is what actually happens when you make fun of a serial killer...
V.R.Stone
Someone makes fun of a serial killer and the detectives are possibly picking up the scent, at last...
Dmcleod
So far... Alex, an ex-drug dealer, has just quit his dead end job in Georgia. Broke and adrift, he goes to a bar and meets a Serbian man named Tony. Tony takes a liking to Alex and buys him drinks.
Dmcleod
Alex has a sordid past, and can't seem to stay in one place for very long without getting in to trouble. He has just quit his dead-end job in Georgia, and doesn't know what to do next.
V.R.Stone
**New Title** The hunt begins (again...)
Jeff Sollars
The main premise is how a person with Synesthesia, comes to terms with it an how it shapes his reality. And the realization of who and what he is.
airikas
This submission is the first chapter from my novel, "The Land of Vod."
I've been told it's like Pan's Labyrinth meets The Wizard of Oz meets The Lord of the Rings--yet completely different.
Alan H Jordan
Unless Seth Kahala eliminates soul control imposed upon humanity by the Themian race, the human spirit will be subjugated, creativity abolished and the human race enslaved, possibly forever.
PatManhattan
He's a research chemist. Perfectly normal guy, though he does have a rather obsessive monologue running in his head.
songerk
A daughter struggles to repair things with her alcoholic father before he dies.
kelliechap
A 21 year old girl has an affair with a street.
V.R.Stone
An old acquaintance, a body disposal and a TV interview.
etmwafb
The first two chapters of a novel set in the 12th century. It is "magic realism," and concerns a Benedictine monk who who becomes a magician.
V.R.Stone
A woman picks up a man in a club, but who is she and where is she taking him?
Chacron
The opening of my novel 'Shadow's Talent,' in which the protagonist, unable to sleep, climbs a tree in the middle of the night. The view isn't quite what he's expecting.
ryanrey21
Jake finds himself in court and faces a difficult decision.
V.R.Stone
A woman picks up a man in a club, but who is she and where is she taking him?
SteveRoisum
After being attacked at a bus stop, Abbott Blankford finds he can speak and understand the Dog language. Now he must usethis relatively lame power to save his bullies, his family, and maybe the world.
Sean Stallard
A brother will do anything to get his sister's inheritance.
Alan H Jordan
Attempts to assassinate the President of the United and PI Catalina Diamond are discovered to be only a part of an international corporation’s profit strategy, triggering a race to avoid chaos.
Jacob
A woman decides to return home after many years to confront her past.
Angel Colón
Jake "Hungry Like the Wolf" Stone goes through the motions and dispenses sage advice during your typical night backstage at an ISA™ Foods World Eating Federation event.
KatePeridot
Targeted at the YA market. Opening chapters. Eighteen year old Leah receives some shocking news about her beautiful, clever, older sister Jenna. Leah determines to find out what happened to her.
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