taskmgrquit
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
Jack is going to have dinner with his father, he hasn't seen him in a long time. Things don't go as planned.
Davis Sheremata
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A mysterious, evolving artificial intelligence analyzes a hacked recording of a human mind in an attempt to penetrate the secrets of consciousness and freedom.
CountLogossian
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Novel excerpt. A young fellow in the late 1990s works with a book packager and his kindly boss introduces him to his coworkers.
AndyNevins
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
The Year is 104 A.D., and Clarissa Farmer, aged 12, believes she is about to have a very nice day. Of course things go wrong for Clarissa, and maybe even worse than she thinks.
TheMaesterReturns
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
In the first chapter of my story, we meet a boy named Orren, who longs to befriend the aliens called the Reptuuls, who humanity is at war with. Though it may be difficult, since he is their slave.
MetalAged
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
Introducing a new character to my second novel
TemperProblm
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
We are introduced to our hero, freshly on the receiving end of some rather unfortunate news.
Alan H Jordan
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
I'm curious if you like the first draft of the beginning of this book. Be totally candid. You won't hurt my feelings.
MaliaRwyn
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A group of loners, misfits and criminals must band together when they realize that the strange occurrences throughout their city are not just coincidence.
Marco Fonseca
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The chip in Trevor's brain was meant to cure him of his mental illness. Instead, it seemingly malfunctions. Now, Trevor must come to grips with his past and embrace the uncertainty of his future.
donwidmer
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Here are the final 2 chapters of my story inspired by the fairy tale "Iron John." It's a modern setting of male initiation which both honors and subverts the original story.
cgunnyon
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
The beginning scene from my novel about a married couple who's marriage almost falls apart because a Native American god wants the wife for himself.
donwidmer
In: Novel Excerpt 1 reviews
This is the fourth chapter of my story inspired by the fairy tale "Iron John." It's a modern setting of male initiation which both honors and subverts the original story.
drewcpurcell
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
A group of volunteer citizen patrol members and a three-legged dog investigate supernatural events in order to save their dying town from complete ruin.
Elizabeth Real
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Chapter 3 of my COVID-era novel... the pandemic is becoming clear
donwidmer
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
This is the third chapter of my story inspired by the fairy tale "Iron John." It's a modern setting of male initiation which both honors and subverts the original story.
donwidmer
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the second chapter of my story inspired by the fairy tale "Iron John." It's a modern setting of male initiation which both honors and subverts the original story.
Elizabeth Real
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
This is Chapter 2 in a COVID-era novel where a webbed collection of New Yorkers face the consequences of their life choices under the tensions of 2020.
donwidmer
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the first chapter of my story inspired by the fairy tale "Iron John." It's a modern setting of male initiation which both honors and subverts the original story.
Elizabeth Real
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
First chapter in an idea I have for a character-driven COVID slice of life novel.
stewart_jas
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Young teenaged couple stop by the coast to take in the view and have some alone time but things go awry.
leafwriter
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
A a golden doodle and others, genetically altered in a University Lab to be highly intelligent, struggle with being different, almost "human." Chased by a cult of killers who want them dead.
jqb3644
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
A excerpt from a horror novella that centers around a mysterious delirium that has come to affect a small lake town.
Serial Bear
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
An accident in the forest leads to an unconscionable act by an already emotionally tormented vampire.
Mustang Patty
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the final scene of my WIP. The name of the Book is Moment by Moment, and it is the last book of a Trilogy. I would like comments regarding pacing, realism, etc.