smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 0 reviews
I need an Edit.This further develops the girls' friendship and Brad and Maddie's history which explains a lot. As I stated 70% of this story is true and the balloon boob incident is true - that's me.
smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
This chapter (or chapters) explore Maddie and Shelby's friendship, Maddie's pregnancy and the source of Shelby's fear of heights (which has consequences later).
smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the beginning of a dark comedy book about 3 friends (in early 30s) who live in San Francisco. This revolves around their poor decisions and early marriages.
Nicodemus
In: Novella 4 reviews
This is a flashback scene after the second charater introduces herself as Abigail saying what a stupid idiot her big brother the crown prince is.
L_Nixon
In: Short Story 3 reviews
This is the first chapter of a novel-in-stories idea. I would love some critical feedback. 'Balls to the Wall' is an updated version of one of my earlier works.
rachel1121
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Continuation of my previous submission. Tom learns more about his family's sudden move, makes a few new friends, and finds his freshman year of high school could be deadly.
wolf0704
In: Short Story 4 reviews
I tried to write an homage to female exploitation movies, like “Faster Pussycat, Kill Kill” where femme fatales take what they want. A women gets revenge for her younger sister and enjoys robbery.
rachel1121
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Tom Northway's family moves to a small island town where he meets a new friend and quickly learns that quaint and idyllic would be the last words used to describe life here.
R.Moon
In: Short Story 2 reviews
This part concerns an angel named... well, Angel.
NickTB
In: Short Story 2 reviews
Strange happenings at local coffee shop leaves Matt a little more than short on time.
R.Moon
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A kidnapped woman. A hotel room. And a pissed off Satan.
MikeJesus
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A story about a boy and a rooster
Dan Lobo
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A boy gets a new dog the same summer his father teaches him how to play baseball.
jessicataylor
In: Short Story 7 reviews
This is a comedy erotica piece. Main character is a surgical resident who gets caught reading a trashy romance novel while she waits for an operation to begin.
taylorblake
In: Short Story 6 reviews
A story about a couple of college kids and the roof of their school
taylorblake
In: Poem 8 reviews
Here I am, testing the waters of a writer's community. This was inspired from a recent trip I took with my girlfriend.
Dan Lobo
In: Short Story 6 reviews
A college student finds himself in jail for the weekend.
Dan Lobo
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A college student finds himself in jail for the weekend.
smortz
In: Short Story 5 reviews
It's about a young woman who faces unwanted pregnancy after a one-night stand. I'm trying to be funny and reveal delusional behavior.
underpurplemoon
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
Not exactly the female version of Batman, but if the headlines would have their way, they would. Our protagonist is caught alone in solitude surrounded by some type of prison, her own creation.
MikeIvy
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Since the second loss of his wife, Orpheus has been lost to a netherworld, a common subconsciousness. It is up to Oedipus to save him from himself, and help cross him over to the Land of the Dead.
DarrenJBoyd
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
A drifter gets on the wrong side of the wrong people in this opening chapter portion from a story about regret and redemption.
smortz
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A dissatisfied middle age women must hide her rape because of her own guilt and in the process risk those she loves. This story reveals the complex nature of human love and the role of self-esteem.
Alice Pow
In: Short Story 6 reviews
Sam's first day on register takes an interesting turn.
Renae Gee
In: Poem 5 reviews
These are two draft poems, I would value your feedback. Do they work, do they evoke something within. I am trying to get ready to enter some competitions and I am not sure if I am at that level as yet