laurieberke
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Hopefully this is Chapter 2, following my previous submission. Not sure that it will work as such yet, so your thoughts are greatly appreciated.
wolf0704
In: Short Story 2 reviews
A psychologist starts to be swayed by his patient and goes along with her as she returns to being a criminal mastermind.
laurieberke
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A lightning strike changes lives.
Hannah.Jane
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A young man dueling the responsibilities of his biker gang and his love affair gets tangled up in a drug-induced web. How can he stay on top of it all?
laurieberke
In: Short Story 4 reviews
This is the story of a family vacation, and not a pretty one...
susan in New Zealand
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
These are excerpts from Journey to Mars in which we meet Johanna, Kenny and Stephanie. as children and teenagers. Their stories will be intertwined with those about the MarsONE astronaut trainees.
susan in New Zealand
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Paolo and Harvey are tasked with selecting volunteers for the MarsONE mission to colonise the Red Planet. Part of a WIP - Think 2001 A Space Odyssey meets When Harry Met Sally. Not SF.
laurieberke
In: Flash Fiction 9 reviews
A short, short about relationships... or not. It's hard to explain, perhaps it's a non-love story.
smithreynolds
In: Short Story 3 reviews
This is the completion of WHIMSY JONES, ABRA DABRA and THE END IS JUST THE BEGINNING TURNED UPSIDE DOWN. This post is thank-you to BROOKE, KEDZ, LAUNAKAY and CHRIS_DIPLACITO for my Gestalt. XXXOOO
smithreynolds
In: Short Story 2 reviews
Abra Dabra is companion to "Whimsy Jones" and The End is Just the Beginning Turned Upside Down" These three pieces are rough drafts from my work of the last three weeks.
Daltonwriting
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A young girl receives a strange package from her father. She hasn't heard from him in 10 years and must make a decision that could change her life forever. Kind of neo-noir/mystery.
smithreynolds
In: Short Story 2 reviews
A young woman plays hardball with her heart and finds the price too high to pay.
Sheri Attani Ro...
In: Short Story 2 reviews
An author is trying to write however the characters keep resisting. But who's real and who isn't?
smithreynolds
In: Short Story 6 reviews
A woman tries to find the meaning of living on the edge.
Mikeola
In: Short Story 4 reviews
First person short story about the protagonists revenge plot against his nemesis Bobby. The story unfolds around a bonfire party and ends up taking a tragic turn for the worst after his plan backfires
Rob Mousavi
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A con man and his only regular, a meth head, draw much too much out of each other. Everything involves God, drugs, a hot tub, flowers, and violence.
Joe P
In: Flash Fiction 6 reviews
The world of higher education is turned upside down for Professor Killebrew and his colleagues when "Brain Beer" comes to campus.
wolf0704
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Much like the Bling Ring, a trio of friends go to the worst offenders and leave little reminders behind of their ecological crimes (instead of stealing stuff).
smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 0 reviews
I need an Edit.This further develops the girls' friendship and Brad and Maddie's history which explains a lot. As I stated 70% of this story is true and the balloon boob incident is true - that's me.
smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
This chapter (or chapters) explore Maddie and Shelby's friendship, Maddie's pregnancy and the source of Shelby's fear of heights (which has consequences later).
smortz
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
This is the beginning of a dark comedy book about 3 friends (in early 30s) who live in San Francisco. This revolves around their poor decisions and early marriages.
Nicodemus
In: Novella 4 reviews
This is a flashback scene after the second charater introduces herself as Abigail saying what a stupid idiot her big brother the crown prince is.
L_Nixon
In: Short Story 3 reviews
This is the first chapter of a novel-in-stories idea. I would love some critical feedback. 'Balls to the Wall' is an updated version of one of my earlier works.
rachel1121
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Continuation of my previous submission. Tom learns more about his family's sudden move, makes a few new friends, and finds his freshman year of high school could be deadly.
wolf0704
In: Short Story 4 reviews
I tried to write an homage to female exploitation movies, like “Faster Pussycat, Kill Kill” where femme fatales take what they want. A women gets revenge for her younger sister and enjoys robbery.