bryanhowie
In: Short Story 8 reviews
Story Completed. No further reviews necessary. Thank you everyone.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
2nd chapter of a novel. Stan looks for forgiveness at a religious revival. Flashbacks at an army camp, on a raft in the MIssissippi, in San Francisco reveal how Stan developed guilt.
Alexander Clark
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A melancholy young man seeks the guidance of an unusual guru where the two spend a tiny pie-wedge of life together, fulfilling the guru's one final longing: to see the sun rise above the ocean.
Nathan
In: Short Story 7 reviews
Same as before -Derek comes to see that he can do right by his loved ones through defeating his addictions and using death as a means to live.
Dave Hanson
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Chapter 6. Keltner tries not kill his recruiter. 2500 words.
Mike Hardin
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A brief run down of the problems that sex and women will bring throughout ones life
perlman3030
In: Short Story 8 reviews
A short story about moving, love, and food.
Anthony David J...
In: Short Story 6 reviews
A man reluctantly vacationing in the Caribbean.
bryanhowie
In: Short Story 11 reviews
Story finished. Thank you for all your help. No further critiques necessary.
jonny parry
In: Short Story 5 reviews
This is a short story about a haunted house. An ambitious reporter, covering a small town scandal, finds a different story to investigate, one she is closer to than she imagines.
Renfield
In: Flash Fiction 10 reviews
A strong woman helps a man through a crisis of faith 1000 words
Liana
In: Short Story 4 reviews
Eliza is pushed by her work friend to hook up with her son. When they all go to visit a fancy old house, Eliza seems to see through a window in time and has a realization.
derekb
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A boy with downs syndrome struggles to fit in at a mainstream school only to find his biggest obstacle is at home.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
"O Jesus" is the first chapter of a 42 chaptered novel. It sets the stage for the type of protagonist you're dealing with. It gives a hint of what his ambitions for his sons might be
Nathan
In: Short Story 6 reviews
Struggling with his inability to control the fates of his girlfriend and their baby, Derek comes to see that he can do right by his loved ones through defeating his addictions and using death to live.
Tyler Brouwer
In: Short Story 5 reviews
Short about a woman who loses someone she didn't think she loved until he was gone.
Anthony David J...
In: Short Story 6 reviews
Short story about a depressed man reluctantly vacationing in the Caribbean.
Alex DeBonis
In: Short Story 10 reviews
Early 80s adolescents in a car are up to some stupid.
Bekanator
In: Short Story 9 reviews
A story about the father/daughter relationship about a slutty daugther and the dad who just can't accept what she's become. Inspired by my teen past and Top Gear, because there's a car involved.
chickie
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A depressing short story about life falling out of control. 2,475 words.
iBronco
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A soldier flees past enemy lines and finds safe harbor in the care of an old man.