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2nd chapter of a novel. Stan looks for forgiveness at a religious revival. Flashbacks at an army camp, on a raft in the MIssissippi, in San Francisco reveal how Stan developed guilt.
A melancholy young man seeks the guidance of an unusual guru where the two spend a tiny pie-wedge of life together, fulfilling the guru's one final longing: to see the sun rise above the ocean.
Same as before -Derek comes to see that he can do right by his loved ones through defeating his addictions and using death as a means to live.
Chapter 6. Keltner tries not kill his recruiter. 2500 words.
A brief run down of the problems that sex and women will bring throughout ones life
A short story about moving, love, and food.
Anthony David J...
A man reluctantly vacationing in the Caribbean.
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This is a short story about a haunted house. An ambitious reporter, covering a small town scandal, finds a different story to investigate, one she is closer to than she imagines.
A strong woman helps a man through a crisis of faith 1000 words
Eliza is pushed by her work friend to hook up with her son. When they all go to visit a fancy old house, Eliza seems to see through a window in time and has a realization.
A boy with downs syndrome struggles to fit in at a mainstream school only to find his biggest obstacle is at home.
"O Jesus" is the first chapter of a 42 chaptered novel. It sets the stage for the type of protagonist you're dealing with. It gives a hint of what his ambitions for his sons might be
Struggling with his inability to control the fates of his girlfriend and their baby, Derek comes to see that he can do right by his loved ones through defeating his addictions and using death to live.
Short about a woman who loses someone she didn't think she loved until he was gone.
Anthony David J...
Short story about a depressed man reluctantly vacationing in the Caribbean.
Early 80s adolescents in a car are up to some stupid.
A story about the father/daughter relationship about a slutty daugther and the dad who just can't accept what she's become. Inspired by my teen past and Top Gear, because there's a car involved.
A depressing short story about life falling out of control. 2,475 words.
A soldier flees past enemy lines and finds safe harbor in the care of an old man.