edgar allen foe
In: Flash Fiction 7 reviews
A teenager goes to a cemetery with the intent to commit suicide.
avery of the dead
In: Short Story 14 reviews
The prompt was the Gnostic Gospels. Benny's mommy wants to go to heaven. Only 1700 words!!!
Strange Photon
In: Short Story 8 reviews
Two former mental patients find comfort in each others arms.
John Loeffler
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A woman stands on the edge of a major life change for her and her family and is haunted in the transition.
ReneeAPickup
In: Short Story 5 reviews
*removed the file, thanks for all the reviews!** We watch a celebratory dinner party go to hell as the friends' secrets are revealed.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Stan attempts to publicly promise his son Ambrose to become a Jesuit priest during the infant's baptism.
ReneeAPickup
In: Short Story 8 reviews
REMOVED. Thanks, all. The prompt was "The Elephant In The Room". We join a group of friends for a celebratory dinner, and watch as the ties that bind come undone.
CuriousityAndTheCat
In: Short Story 7 reviews
A portait sitting that proves to be more than the subject realizes.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Stan and Holly await the birth of their firstborn. They live on Rangeview Ave. in the Highland Park section of Los Angeles. Incidentally where Diane Keaton grew . Her grandmother lived on Rangeview.
Strange Photon
In: Flash Fiction 12 reviews
An old man surveys his home from an armchair. (Obviously more than this, but with the text being only about 500 words, I can't very well summarize without reiterating.)
voodoo_em
In: Flash Fiction 12 reviews
I'm going for the heart ~ did I get yours?
eggogallego
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A young man's evening with his parents and college friends later turns into a fiasco involving a misplaced dinner entree.
Deets999
In: Short Story 4 reviews
Opening scene to a screenplay I'm working on about a man's odd weekend in the city (2K words).
Strange Photon
In: Poem 5 reviews
After reading and reviewing some poems by writers here, I wanted to toss my tattered hat in the ring for a good beating.
Bekanator
In: Short Story 7 reviews
Thanks for the reviews! Story has been taken down. (An antique store employee becomes obsessed with a woman he believes is Sylvia Plath. (approx. 2500 words)
underpurplemoon
In: Poem 9 reviews
Thank you!
Pushpaw
In: Novella 7 reviews
The beginning of a novella about a film school dropout trying to write a zombie movie and his inability to love a sweet girl.
KodyB
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A small-town preacher faced with the loss of his livelihood and his standing in the community when he begins to question his faith.
Pushpaw
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Edward's life is boring, useless and weird. Here's some of it.
christinacrawford
In: Short Story 8 reviews
This is about a sixty-three year old woman addicted to online dating.
whiterabbit
In: Flash Fiction 6 reviews
(Thanks everyone for your great feedback. I'm currently rewriting this story.) A young couple on a night drive.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
In the previous chapter Stan discovers an electricity between him and Holly, but Holly's best friend Chloe creates a dilemma for Stan. This chapter finds Stan dealing with his dilemma. 3,222 words.
Courtney
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
underpurplemoon
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
George Boardway has been in love with Deanne for quite some time. Deanne is a single mom who happens to be a sushi chef. He finally tells her. This is just a prologue.
Strange Photon
In: Short Story 7 reviews
An elderly man copes with his wife's worsening illness while the couple entertains an old friend. (1,700 words)