dufrescm
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A soldier's view of Admiral Nelson during the Battle of Santa Cruz de Tenerife, when Admiral Nelson lost his arm.
jamesdearling
In: Flash Fiction 8 reviews
This is a quick story about the fear of dying alone motivating decisions. I feel compelled to mention I'm new here, so if we haven't interacted, hello.
JEFFREY GRANT BARR
In: Flash Fiction 12 reviews
Experimental claptrap
bryanhowie
In: Flash Fiction 8 reviews
Story is finished. No more critiques needed. A quick outburst of anger over the symbolism of a sandcastle.
bryanhowie
In: Novella 6 reviews
My novella about a young girl, a crazy grandmother, and a caretaker.
K. C. Kimbril
In: Short Story 4 reviews
It's all about you.
Covewriter
In: Flash Fiction 5 reviews
A girl gets a lesson about heaven, but forgets it until she is older. Around 1300 words.
Sound
In: Short Story 5 reviews
Lucifer creates life, and jealousy follows.
Courtney
In: Poem 9 reviews
Three free verse poems. 21, 27, and 28 lines.
Sound
In: Flash Fiction 6 reviews
Inspired by Carly's Monday Flash Fiction prompt: Afterlife. Javier finds Jesus.
Renfield
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Reflections on some innocence lost type shizz
Laramore Black
In: Short Story 6 reviews
My last WAR story. Looking for opinions and advice.
Sound
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A breakup waiting to happen
Jack_Spiegel
In: Essay 3 reviews
Just a bit of advice for the mentally alert.
Angel Colón
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
A cranky old man, Arthur Graves, watches a little television, heats up leftovers and internalizes the frustrations of age on the night he dies.
K. C. Kimbril
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Trip to a brothel, reunion at a funeral. It's a pretty full day.
Sound
In: Short Story 2 reviews
Edgar, in grief due to the loss of his wife, confronts the cure that was discovered shortly after his wife's death.
beepich
In: Short Story 2 reviews
Basically about spontaneity, friends and finding your place.
Jonathan Riley
In: Short Story 7 reviews
A dyslexic teenage girl with an odd name in a small town struggles to find her identity.
dufrescm
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A 1940's musical group drives from SC to Atlanta. (This was my WAR2, Round 2 story)
Covewriter
In: Short Story 4 reviews
This is my first round WAR story about a young woman witnessing a brutal beating in her father-in-law's barn in the 1960s.
Stacy_R_Haynes
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A lunch break transforms into a moment of social networking, gossip, social etiquette, and some eating.
JEFFREY GRANT BARR
In: Short Story 5 reviews
An inadvisable foray into literary fiction.
Penelope
In: Short Story 5 reviews
This is the story of an elderly woman and her encounter with a garden pest.
dnlsutter
In: Short Story 2 reviews
"Aberdeen" is a piece of fiction about rediscovering the beauty of one's childhood hometown, and coping with the death of one's mother. It is also my attempt at exploring humor in dialogue.