Robert Sims
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The intro to a hopeful novel. Feel free to do partial reviews as it is a little longer.
ZachWiser
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A man sits alone in a room drafting and dispensing apologies. However, the apology that matters the most is the one he cannot bare to face.
Angel Colón
In: Short Story 5 reviews
What happens when there's no more room in hell, but it doesn't go exactly as advertised? Dave learns the hard way that reality will always be more boring than fantasy.
lauraroxie
In: Short Story 3 reviews
A young woman struggles with the possibility of having family she did not know existed.
Robert Sims
In: Essay 5 reviews
A symbolic memory from a few decades ago.
burghie
In: Short Story 4 reviews
A man. A softball bat with a name. Possible beer league glory ensues.
jlowes
In: Short Story 6 reviews
Memories of childhood stir in a young man dealing with the pending death of his father.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Rebecca plays the piano for her math tutor.
Linda
In: Short Story 5 reviews
When Kit's wife goes missing, he cuts a deal to get out of prison and search for her.
Dan J. Fiore
In: Short Story 2 reviews
No more reviews needed, thanks.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
Rebecca works up the courage to tell James the truth.
braycraft
In: Flash Fiction 11 reviews
A very short, 400 word story about a kid in a classroom who has to pee.
Graham Paul Donovan
In: Short Story 5 reviews
I think this is about two-thirds of what will be the completed story. We follow our narrator and Alice as they start to try to unravel the mysteries of his past.
Richard Camelot
In: Short Story 4 reviews
An apathetic teenager escapes reality during a family reunion.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
After a bad fall, Saira takes a day to recouperate. Conversations between her and her housemates as Gregor passes the buck. Chapter 4.
acm323
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
James has something important to tell Rebecca.
tooth
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A short story about a young girl struggling to contain her angst and frustrations as she deals with severe life changes
Stacy_R_Haynes
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Charlene finds herself more and more engrossed with loathing new employee, Jeremy, and goes to great lengths to spite him for his success.
tooth
In: Short Story 5 reviews
A short story about a damaged soul who uses violence to return the love of the woman who nurtures him.
Sofia
In: Short Story 3 reviews
Shenanigans in the Garden Club.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Chapter three: Saira and Duggan are interrupted by some interesting characters. The walk home is a challenge for Saira, who is apprehensive about facing her housemates after her accident.
Graham Paul Donovan
In: Short Story 6 reviews
Beginning of a new short story. Here, we meet the narrator, grow accustomed to some of his habits, hear a little of his past, and witness an encounter with a new person in his life.
Andrea Guldin
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Saira and Duggan head out to go fishing, with disastrous consequences. Bodily injury results. Set in a rural landscape under subtle militant rule.
Richard Camelot
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
This submission is the first two chapters of a Novel I have yet to complete/edit. Basically, two young men addled with substance abuse tendencies set their sights on becoming Ironmen Tri-athletes.
lauraroxie
In: Short Story 3 reviews
In a single evening, certain events bring doubt to Faye's perception of events and of her life.