Kedzie
Wait, what? YUP. Critique this story and earn 12 pts. How, you say? Easy-Peasy. Instructions inside. Read story BEFORE reading reviews. There are several plot twists and the reviews contain spoilers.
NicoBell
Recently divorced, Mona longs for adventure in the Las Vegas. But after entering a contest to marry Elvis Presley, she finds out she's gotten more than she bargained for.
Joe P
A father and daughter try to resolve their differences in the rusting husk of a Mister Smiley theme park.
mark william mills
A woman makes friends with a thing she should have ignored.
NicoBell
When Lena starts hallucinating, she is forced to seek help from the one person she hates - her mother. But will Lena be able to follow her mom's advice, or will the price be too great?
NicoBell
A supernatural entity torments Rebecca, a psychologist with a guilty conscience, in this 3220 word horror story entitled Make It Stop.
Chris Campeau
A hard-up man living in an amusement park deals with his misfortune and guilt among the most “lively” of company.
AChesstell
Katarina is the lifelong servant to the Blood Countess, Erzsebet Bathory. Through Katarina's eyes we see the brutality and magic that Erzsebet wields over her doomed subjects.
Joe P
A pride of house cats struggles with life after their Gods have died and abandoned them.
Maegan Heil
Just when a lonely kid finally makes a friend, it's time to pack up and move.
Kraig Pickel
Evan trout has had an 80's song stuck in his head for decades.
thomascoaker
A bipolar man that reads water meters struggles with a crazy dog named Gucci and a rattlesnake bite.
Glenn Mitchell
A researcher collaborates with a prison warden to experiment on inmates. The warden fears being exposed by the leaking of information, but it's a different type of leak they should be worried about.
Locust-furnace
A whirlwind romance, a wedding tradition, a cold, dark lake. What could go wrong?
981 Words
Joe P
A hearer of the World Wide Hum is out with his service dog Barkley hunting a demon. When they wander into a local pawn shop, they find a device that turns off the hum but allows the demon to kill.
Daltonwriting
A man breaks a tooth and needs an immediate dental appointment. Little does he know that this is an appointment that he will never forget.
VividVoid
A man sees a face staring at him from a window across the street. He visits insanity trying to figure out what it is.
Joe P
A Sheriff has to recapture an escaped teenage girl who claims to be an alien from Outer Space.
Daltonwriting
Not your stereotypical apocalypse story. This one involves cats. A bystander accounts the end of the world caused by a cute and fuzzy kitten.
Joe P
A scientist sends himself into the future. The couple who move into his laboratory/home perceive him as something like a ghost. Now he must use his ghost-like abilities to try to save himself.
LaunaKay
I wrote this in response to a Writer's Digest prompt with a 700-word limit. The prompt: When a man takes lunch to his wife's office, he is told she hasn't worked there in weeks.
Daltonwriting
The title speaks for itself. A horror piece with paranormal elements. The main character purchases an item and is shocked to discover that it comes with a warning so she decides to do some research.
Joe P
A monster has to fake his way through a dental visit to get an aching tooth pulled.
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