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That's just amazing. Amazing writing. Thanks.
Thank you so much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Awesome. Really liked the dark yet calm and sinister tone. My only criticism, if you can even call it that, would be the line "My lip was bleeding into my mouth" on the second page seemed kind of random. There was no lead in or out as to why. Maybe it was the biting cold or anxious gnawing at her lip. Just thought it either needed more or could be scrapped altogther. All in all, extremely enjoyable. Thanks.