Five Four kids set out for a day of care-free fun, but what they discover shows them a completely different side of life.
7/14/12 Note: This is an edited version of what I originally posted. I changed a bit, adding some detail that I hope develops the characters better, completely removing one of the boys. It's a little longer now too. I welcome any and all criticisms (and any kind words too). I hope this one flows better and tells the story as I imagined it, but let me know if it doesn't.