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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 10, 2013 - 11:07pm

Thank you, Mr. Penetrator. I hope your recovery stays so happy. :)

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts January 11, 2013 - 1:07am

@Jeff Richard Thomas and Gordon Highland and Nik Korpon barely if ever have used this particular workshop, though. They've been in it long enough and getting good publications that they have their trusted beta readers and the confidence to send stuff out without too many eyes on it. I agree pretty much with your sentiment though. I think there's people that are new to writing, people new to workshopping, and you know pretty solid writers with just kind of broken stories; that's what's in the workshop. I don't like some idea of giving shit reviewers a pass, that's the opposite of why a workshop is valuable. All the learning taking place in a workshop is from reading and writing reviews. If someone puts all their focus into giving the most informed and helpful review they can, that's precisely where they are going to make strides in writing mechanics. Not just writing crap stories over and over again. Everything else, I'm right with you. I think I've got a good relationship with the workshop wherein I know I have a couple guys reviewing who are going to give me reliably good feedback all day, I know my reviews for them are going to be everything I possibly have ever learned about writing, the only weakness is my shitty ass stupid stories. That's a good ratio for workshopping. Otherwise there'd be no need for the whole thing.

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts January 11, 2013 - 1:09am

What op you get done, anyway? Hope the healing goes okay. Painkillers are fucking awesome.

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fport from Canada is reading The World Until Yesterday - Jared Diamond January 11, 2013 - 1:16am

Mr. Penetrator got penetrated.

The nice thing is that there is so little pain nowadays. Til later. I hope the recovery goes well and that you can flee the hospital quickly.

When they finally placed me into general wards it took twenty minutes and three people to get me to the biffy about 15 feet from my bed and another 20 to get me back. Three days later my S.O. came by and found my wheelchair and walker in the room along with an empty bed. They pointed down the hallway when she asked and said, "He went for a shower." I left that afternoon.

For an encore you can take up dental surgery. A little jaw bone reduction to refit a crown that broke off saw a single pain killer that lasted all weekend and made me feel like a twenty year old again.

Yes, Pen you did go on. And no, you didn't make a lot of sense. Except the part where you expressed concern about Carly sticking with us. I'm sure that people will review her work if she stuffs some flash pieces into a workshop together for critique and feedback as my friend Jonathon suggested and Ren amplified. I don't see any reason why not. There's no need to change anything to accommodate that, it's just an adaptation.

As for speed of review, just take your previous reviewer list and PM them at the same time as you put it on the 'whoring' board. You'll soon become a known quantity for that sort of review and people will probably go out of their way to make sure you get reviewed as soon as they see it.

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JEFFREY GRANT BARR from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life January 11, 2013 - 2:47am

Yeah, I dont think I did a great job of explaining myself. I left out a fairly important bit of my point trading scheme, which is to have trading partners go back and get those quick points from older reviews/abandoned stories. No harm in that. I have the same gripe, in that you have to do a lot of reviewing to get enough points to post a story - at which point it may all be for naught if, say, a WAR round ends and the shop is flooded with those stories, or an influx of new members pour in and post their stuff, at which point yours bubbles down and there you are. 

Ren, my examples were pretty poor, as they don't in fact use the workshop too much - I guess I meant more in participating in general.  And while they may not review or post in the shop, having them around has a certain cachet all the same. You're right, most of the value of the shop comes from the leaderboard of the shop, at least for reviews. 

I had some bits and peices of various bits and pieces removed -- I'm hoping I won't need them anymore. I won't post the details, as they are disturbing and gross. And as good as the drugs are, my incipient panic is keeping me more lucid now. Well, marginally.

Jesus fport, point me in the direction of that painkiller--I have a long, awful weekend staring me in the face.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 11, 2013 - 3:06am

With a random workshop like we have I view it more as a way to get some fresh eyes on something that I'm having trouble with that my normal beta readers aren't able to help with (mostly because I asked them to read something else). It is a great tool, but I mainly look at it as for practice revising, doing my LBLs on my own work kind of thing.

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts January 11, 2013 - 3:29am

If you're alluding to the Vas Deferens, I hear that's a pretty eventful recovery. Be sure to take phone pictures, apparently it goes through a wild variety of colors and textures over a couple days.

Yeah, I don't know. Import some more worth on your writing, if you're just focusing on workshop points. It's easy to rack up some review points, harder still to decide if a story is good enough to workshop or good enough to send out as is. Do you need to workshop every single thing you write? Is it that much of a time-suck in your agenda that you can't bare learning what you would reviewing a good/bad story versus writing a good/bad story? From the point of view of someone receiving reviews, it's easy to spot out when someone comments on your work that obviously doesn't care, is just doing it for the self-service. It's not really worth either of our time.

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jyh from VA is reading whatever he feels like January 11, 2013 - 11:32am

There's a lot to question in the review system.

How many LBLs do you need? Once you get the one with the grammar comb, eveything else could be communicated w/o an attachment. Maybe there could be a tipping system, with a per-review point cap to prevent farming, instead of rating a review. You could just toss however many points you thought it was worth. One point for a cursory "I read it and it sucked/ruled." Two for some actual advice. Three, four, five for truly insightful and detailed analysis.

As it is, I think the workshop does its job. It could be changed, but there would be ways to exploit it no matter how it's designed. Its usefulness (as people have said) depends on the goals of the writer and the attitudes of the reviewers.

Also, I would have no problem reviewing a bundle of flash stories as one submission. I've thought about doing that myself. Make it clear that's what is in the file, and I think people would be no less likely to review it than a 5000-word first chapter.

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Fylh from from from is reading is from is reading is reading is reading reading is reading January 11, 2013 - 1:42pm

Since I don't/wouldn't interfere with the running of LitReactor, I can't comment on much, but it's really nice to see people being open and even critical about it. I'd feel we'd done something wrong if it was perfect, or people felt they couldn't say stuff.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 11, 2013 - 2:35pm

I would like the cost/rewards to be based on the length of what you are reviewing. 3 points for a 10 line poem, 1 for any review of it, that kind of thing not saying has to be those numbers. Right now it is the same to do a haiku and a novella.

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fport from Canada is reading The World Until Yesterday - Jared Diamond January 11, 2013 - 8:37pm

Heh, Fylh, fancy having you pop in and make a comment on saying stuff. Does it feel chilly in here now? Dwayne, where are you? J.Y.? Guys...come on. Ya Fylh, but it is darn near perfect. 

/me crawls into wall and pulls grate into place behind me.

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jyh from VA is reading whatever he feels like January 11, 2013 - 8:41pm

Does it feel chilly in here now?

Um, no. The only part of Phil's post I found off-putting was the fact he said he wouldn't "interfere," when I thought he was one of the founders. "Why would he not interfere?" I wondered.

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Mess_Jess from Sydney, Australia, living in Toronto, Canada is reading Perfect by Rachael Joyce January 11, 2013 - 8:46pm

/me crawls into wall and pulls grate into place behind me.

That gave me a right chuckle.

@J.Y. - I thought the same thing, actually. If anyone would interfere, I thought Phil would have a pretty good right and reason to interfere.

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Fylh from from from is reading is from is reading is reading is reading reading is reading January 12, 2013 - 2:53am

I wouldn't interfere because I agreed, with Dennis and Kirk, that I wasn't going to have that kind of involvement. I don't make decisions, I don't hire people, and I don't get consulted except on any big "huge" changes.

Basically, beyond the first few months, and all the time leading up to the launch, my "admin" role at LitReactor has been as limited as possible. I have way, way too many other things to do for me to get actively involved — especialy when the people who do run it are doing a better job than I could. I'm not cut out for this kind of stuff.

 

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 12, 2013 - 5:35am

The start of being comptent is knowing when you're not. So, without humor, thanks.

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Fylh from from from is reading is from is reading is reading is reading reading is reading January 12, 2013 - 6:04am

Word, dude.

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest January 12, 2013 - 6:26am

It's not up to Phil to interfere, it's up to us. Phil can go to Kirk or Dennis and tell them until he's blue in the face that the workshop needs to have higher point values to give, but Phil is only one person and he doesn't post in the workshop. Sure, Kirk and Dennis run the site, but they run the site for us, the members. As members, we need to step up and say we'd like more points to be given or a restructuring of the point system. I've been here since the launch of LR and have seen quite a few discussions about this, but the problem is that no one has stepped up (at least not that I'm aware of) and said anything to Kirk or Dennis. I can assure that Kirk is probably following this thread. Try sending him a PM, he'll get back to you. Someone could start a petition. I know that any issues that the members have had that only admin can solve have been considered. Some of those issues have changed, some not. They need to do what's in the best interest of the site as a whole. This is easily the best writers site/workshop on the web. But, if we, as members, don't step up and voice our opinions outside of a forum thread, those issues may fall to the wayside, or may not ever be heard. Lit Reactor is our site, built for writers like us. Keeping members happy is part of admin's job, but if they don't know what we're unhappy about they can't do anything about it. 

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. January 12, 2013 - 9:57am

What I would like to see changed is the point system. It doesn't work with the way I like to write so I may have to find a different board. I write a couple of flash stories a week, sometimes more. I like to get them critiqued and out quick.

There are a lot of flash fiction submissions coming up, Carly.  You'll have plenty of points pretty soon.  It does take some dedication, but I've learned as much from DOING critiques as I've learned from getting critiques.  It's guarenteed to make you a better writer.  

Don't leave.  

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest January 12, 2013 - 10:04am

^ Much agreed

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 12, 2013 - 10:24am

Thanks.

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Liana from Romania and Texas is reading Naked Lunch January 12, 2013 - 10:50am

I don't really like it when people create categories for people. Especially categories that divide and structure writers (don't we all think we're unique and original?) Sorry Jeffrey, it's just me. I can't stomach it. 

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 12, 2013 - 2:40pm

@Liana - I'd agree, but for practical reasons. I know some people here like Phil are just better writers then me, and some I won't call out because that would be a jerk move are worse. That doesn't mean that we all want the same type of feed back.

Also, how do you judge quality on that? I don't mean that in the stupid 'oh it is all subjective' way, but in a literal 'is our standard useful' way. Do we go by the quality of final draft? I can see the logic, but is that useful? Do we go by the quality of what they submit? Again I can see the logic, but is that useful? Because I've seen writers before whose first draft looked like a stupid gorilla wrote it during a 3 day bender, then after me/others making a few basic suggestions used either a lot of skill (or literal physics breaking magic) to turn into something wonderful.

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JEFFREY GRANT BARR from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life January 12, 2013 - 3:05pm

Liana fits into category X: one of a kind!

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Liana from Romania and Texas is reading Naked Lunch January 12, 2013 - 4:22pm

That's the exact category I was looking for, Jeff!

I want to start another thread if possible, and title it, "Who is a writer?"

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fport from Canada is reading The World Until Yesterday - Jared Diamond January 12, 2013 - 9:24pm

Bwuuwhahahahahahaha,

<snort>

heh

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts January 12, 2013 - 11:14pm

There was actually an old discussion that Kirk started where members could express concerns and seem to remember Kirk being quite involved in the further discussion. I think why no actual big changes to the workshop system is that no one has really come to a consensus on what definitely doesn't work about it, and most of the problems people bring up could be cured by their modifying their own usage of the workshop to where it's not so overwhelming, rather than changing everything for everybody.

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 12:49am

Thanks for the suggestions, everyone. It's definitely something anyway, and I appreciate it.

I emailed the owners and told them my thoughts. If you use the point system enough that it's wildly inequitable for you, now's the time to let them know! Maybe they'll be ready to upgrade to a more sophisticated point system as the site grows.

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun January 13, 2013 - 1:11am

On the topic of the point system: How would you suggest it be made better, Carly? I'm particularly curious, if you were to change the point requirements, how many points (using the current allocation system) do you think you should be required to earn before you have enough to post?

Simply awarding more points or requiring fewer doesn't really solve the issue if it is just being done to accommodate someone like yourself who wants to bang out 250-500 words every day. No matter what, you're going to have to read and review other's work.

You're in a unique place where I'm not sure what the best thing for us to do is shy of creating an entirely separate system/procedure for flash. Which is something that I'm not excited about doing because my immediate thoughts tell me that it makes everything overly complex.

We specifically run a give & get system so that people don't flood the submissions as fast as they can jot them down and though there has been discussion about it in the past, I don't know that anyone has had a better idea and from the feedback that we get most people like that format. We've run the same essential system with minor variances for more than 5 years and generally it has been successful. But if we can do a better job of cracking the nut, I'm happy to do it.

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Jonathan Riley from Memphis, Tennessee is reading Flashover by Gordon Highland January 13, 2013 - 1:24am

I think the "flash book" thread Carly is leading may be a great way to solve the problem. People will be studying flash. They can flood the workshop with their exercises. Many dedicated members will want the extremely short stories reviewed promptly and it will alow for quicker points for all involved. Those who are not interested in flash may continue with their reviewing habbits.

Not to mention the Flash rounds of War II. So maybe those writing Flash only have to review Flash in the workshop. So long as the form is popular it could be a way for those writing it to benefit. It takes a proactive effort like Carly's to get something like that going but I think it could thrive at a place like this. It definitely has my interest peeked.

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 2:32am

Kirk, of course you have to read and review other people's work to get the same back, I wouldn't dispute that. But, it also has to be an amount that is reasonable, not a novel's worth of critiques every week to post two flash stories. I just can't do it. I could bundle them, but that slows me down significantly when the whole reason I enjoy flash is I like the quickness. I'd rather get them a different way then. It's not an unreasonable idea, it just isn't for me. But then, I can't imagine I'm the only one who finds it not workable to use a point exchange system where the unit of exchange used is so extremely broad. Suggestions? I was on a board that had no point system at all and I thought it worked better. In fact, I thought it was surprisingly good. Another did have the categories and that worked well, too. At least there was some kind of differentiation between posting/critiquing a poem and a novella. Those are two suggestions. Or, perhaps just different amounts of points to pay and to earn by length, one point for each thousand words, both ways, something like that. But if you think it works well then that's it. Thanks for your consideration and quick reply. Much appreciated.

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun January 13, 2013 - 10:35am

Thanks for the notes. I don't see us ever removing the point system or something like it. In the past when we experimented with an unmetered submission process we found that a lot of people simply flooded posts without ever actually giving anything back. And as a result you end up with tons of junk posts no one ever reads. It results in a system that to me, is too discouraging to everyone.

I'm not going to say what you post is bad because I don't know what your writing process is like. But I will make the argument that burning out 1000 words then immediately posting it for feedback isn't really what we've ever considered the workshop to be about. It was always kind of designed to help people refine ideas and drafts. Which, I think by their nature, is a little less immediate of a process. And you're probably correct, that is not a flow that is geared towards flash.

All that said, I have been mentally toying with the idea of adding in a flash prompt section to the workshop. Something that would have curator, so to speak, who could post prompts daily or every few days. Then people can post against that prompt until it expired. What I like about having a curator is it gives them the ability to kind of shape prompts around what is happening on the site, in the news, in pop culture, etc. I feel like that could be a lot of fun for people.

It still doesn't solve your unique problem, sadly. But I'll continue to think on how we might work better with someone who has a writing process like yours.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. January 13, 2013 - 11:01am

I think a flash section would be pretty incredible.  I'd still use the points system for it, if possible, but only 5 points to submit, or something.  It would make for an interesting addition to the workshop.  If it were moderated, then anything that's over 1000 words could automatically cost 15 points (like the normal workshop submission).  

You could also put a sliding scale for submissions, but the coding would probably be even harder.  Something like 5 points = 1000 words.  10 points = 2000 words.  15 points = 2,500 - 9,000 words ( 3,000 seeming to be the average), 50 points = 10,000+ words.

Policing having everyone put in their actual word count would be difficult, so it would probably have to be moderated, but I posted a novella and got very helpful reviews on it.  If it had cost me 100 points, I still would have done it.

 

I don't think Lit Reactor should be all about flash at all, but it definitly is getting a large amount of flash writers who love the challenge of word economy combined with complete stories.

I love Lit Reactor the way it is, though.  So any changes are just icing on top of icing on top of ice-cream cake.

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun January 13, 2013 - 11:43am

I've considered the sliding scale, bryan. The only way I could see that working would be if we required you to dump the text of your writing into the text area on the site. This is something that I've heard resistance on in the past and something that I don't terribly like the idea of. 

The pros

- We could do additional things progmatically (like word counts)

The cons

- More difficult for you to print and make notes on or read away from the computer (this one could be mitigated)
- The writer loses any real control of formatting
- The writer might be forced to re-format their text manually in the system (irritating work)
- The writer loses control of some basic document-security stuff

Oh and if we did put a "flash" system in place, it wouldn't allow the uploading of documents as the original submission. I think this could help keep it a little more "honest". Plus, it would hopefully make people remain true to the idea of "I'm writing this right now" that I picture when I think of flash. 

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OtisTheBulldog from Somerville, MA is reading The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao by Junot Diaz January 13, 2013 - 11:50am

I wouldn't like dumping text into the site for the reasons you've stated. But also as a reviewer, for a couple reasons. First and foremost, the LBLs which we've come to know and love and count on. I also like downloading a writer's story to my laptop and going to coffee shops or libraries where they don't necessarily have free Wi-Fi and reading and reviewing there. It's nice not being tethered to the internet.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. January 13, 2013 - 12:14pm

Yeah, dumping the text would be awful.  That's why every submission would have to rely on the honesty of the submitter... and there would have to be a babysitter for anyone who reports that a submission's word count is wrong and has the power to make the submission cost the appropriate amount - or we just let it go and call that person out in the critiques and use good old fashioned peer-pressure to make sure they don't lie (such as just leaving reviews that say "Did not read because your word count was incorrect").  

On the plus side, having a section for word count so that it's included with every story submitted would thrill me.  I like knowing how big of a project I'm getting into before downloading the document.

On the big down side - someone would have to code such a system and that sounds difficult.  

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun January 13, 2013 - 12:55pm

I've got some updates going in soon. I should be able to add a "word count" field to that list.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 13, 2013 - 1:13pm

Kirk I don't mean this to degrade anyone, but after the appearance I've seen on some of these workshop files I'd count 'The writer loses any real control of formatting' as a pro. 

Is there anyway it could auto generate a .doc file or such, and we download that? Not saying I'm all gun ho about it, just wondering.

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 1:37pm

I'm not going to say what you post is bad because I don't know what your writing process is like. But I will make the argument that burning out 1000 words then immediately posting it for feedback isn't really what we've ever considered the workshop to be about. It was always kind of designed to help people refine ideas and drafts. Which, I think by their nature, is a little less immediate of a process. And you're probably correct, that is not a flow that is geared towards flash. 

It still doesn't solve your unique problem, sadly

 

Kirk, to clarify, honestly, virtually all of my pieces get published. I do not "burn out" rough drafts and slap them up there willy nilly for review. I feel that critiquing is a valuable resource, and especially when the cost is so very high, it wouldn't even make sense for me to do that. I go through them several times and also with my husband, who helps me, first. There is no reason at all that I should work slower. That is not that much to write in a week. I am not sure why you feel that I am a unique user. I would think I'm more rather the usual. However, of course, those who rarely use the system would probably not have many problems working with any system. Also, a good percentage of the stories are flash. It certainly isn't an outlier, either, these days.

So, I would not think I'm an outlier with a unique situation, but again, I'm not on that end. I do wonder if people simply work with what's available or go elsewhere, though. Especially since a good number of them may not have been on any other boards and therefore don't have anything to compare it with. That's just to bring up the possibility that even if you haven't heard many complaints, that still doesn't mean the system is equitable- it really can't be, just look at the spread there. Of course that will be more of an issue for the ones who actually use it more. I'm just talking about a system that has some kind of reasonable match up between what is put in and what is received. As I said, it simply isn't that, at all.

Anyway, just wanted to clarify. But I'm just one person on here, so I'll leave it to the rest now. Thanks for considering.

 

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun January 13, 2013 - 1:36pm

I get all that Carly but you are clearly an outlier. If you're writing several pieces a week and nearly all of them are being published, you are different from our typical user. That's a hell of a lot of success and it's awesome. And just to be clear, I wasn't addressing the quality of your writing personally. I was addressing the person who isn't you, and doesn't take any thought or care into what they share. 

And you're right. I see in your case where the work/reward ratio is off. I would agree that the normal load doesn't make sense for someone who is writing 250 words. The issue is, I don't see an easy fix to that without scrapping the system entirely and I am going to need a lot of convincing that we should do that.

I'm still curious though, what work load would you consider fair for the amount of stuff you would like to post?

 

Also, @Dwayne - The very idea of making the site generate .doc files makes my skin crawl... But yeah it technically is doable. The biggest issue you would have with the formatting is indentations, something the internet doesn't really like much. I'm with you, that I would love to have all uniform submissions but as soon as I do that, someone is going to freak out that they can't have blue comic-sans in their story and it's crucial that they do...

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 1:44pm

I'm still curious though, what work load would you consider fair for the amount of stuff you would like to post? 

Thanks, Kirk.

As I said (or maybe I revised after you read it, I revise a lot, lol) I think a fair system would be that it costs 1 point per thousand words to put a story up for review, and you get 1 point per thousand words for giving a review. The points being done in even thousands, it doesn't have to be word for word. So a story of 1 word to 1,000 words costs one point, and you get one point for reviewing it. 1,001 to 2, 000 is two points both ways, etcetera.

Of course, I can't know how that would shake out for sure, but it sounds right to me.

Thanks again for considering. 

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 3:40pm

Since it's on the table, I guess this is the time to say this, too. If and when any changes are made, I suggest also that the reviewer automatically gets the full points, one size fits all, unless the one who receives it finds it scant enough or rude enough to report and let a moderator decide.Sometimes newbies aren't used to real critiques and it's not uncommon to privately get nicked a point for the roughest work that takes the most time when they weren't told what they wanted to hear. I don't think it helps anybody, so I would have the benefit lean toward the one who actually did the work. 

Okay, so those are my thoughts. I hope my feedback is helpful and that I'm not just being a pain. Thanks. :)

 

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest January 13, 2013 - 4:02pm

 I suggest also that the reviewer automatically gets the full points, one size fits all, unless the one who receives it finds it scant enough or rude enough to report and let a moderator decide.

- This would essentially cause the same issues you're having. I tend to give detailed reviews along with detailed LBLs. A 2500 word story can take me up to three hours to LBL and review. Giving the person who says, 'Hey, great story.' the same amount of points for some one who's taken the time and effort to really try to help someone out just seems, well, not fair. And, unless the review is overly rude, how many people would actually report it to a moderator for their reveiw? Seems like a collossal pain in the ass to me. I understand your frustration with having to review 2k word stories while you're only submitting 1k word stories and receiving the same amount of points, but I really think the problem was solved when someone mentioned lumping two or three ff pieces into one document. I, and a lot of others here, submit stories every few weeks or so. Sometimes we'll get on a kick (as I've been lately trying to polish up stories for publication) and submit a couple in a week or two. Even then, though, I'm still only submitting a story every couple of weeks versus every couple of days. We continue to review and let our points build. I have enough points right now to submit around fifteen stories. In the year and a half that I've been here I think I've only submitted that many stories. I don't LBL and review to simply gain points so I can submit my next story. I reveiw because it's a great learning experience for me. Howie said it best:   It does take some dedication, but I've learned as much from DOING critiques as I've learned from getting critiques.  It's guarenteed to make you a better writer.  That's why I'm here, to be a better writer, and learning to be a better writer is helping out other writers. My suggestion, and this is just me being completely honest, would be to do some reviews and not submit for awhile. Let your points grow. 

I don't want you to leave, either. You're a great writer and reviewer, but this is a site designed for all types of writers. Some write novels. Some write short stories and some write flash. But to put any one of the three in a category all their own will only create more problems. Your stories receive more reviews than the average writer on here because they are ff pieces. I would better understand your argument if you were only getting two reviews and having to put out five to gain more points. 

My suggestion for all of this is to add one more point value. Add 5 points. 99% of the time I give three points, despite the content of the review and/or LBL. I think if the reviewer has taken the time to read and make comments, that alone is worth three points. But, sometimes those reviews aren't all that helpful, but I know the time spent and awarding one or two points doesn't jive with me. 

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. January 13, 2013 - 4:55pm

^^ perfectly said.

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Carly Berg from USA is reading Story Prompts That Work by Carly Berg is now available at Amazon January 13, 2013 - 5:12pm

Well, I'm just one customer, but that's my feedback on the structure of the workshop, for what it's worth and from having several other boards to compare it with. I'm going to find a second board for my writing overflow and stick around for the rest of the goodies, so I'm covered, personally. Thanks, guys.

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JEFFREY GRANT BARR from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life January 13, 2013 - 5:13pm

No, sorry; the first paragraph is unbalanced, and one should never bold and caps lock for emphasis. Three stars.

Just kidding!

 

I am going to start blasting the worsksop with all the bibs and bobs that I've been collecting rejections for over the past 6 months. I won't submit anything that hasn't been submitted somewhere already, but be prepared to scoop up lots of points: I rate everyone 'Very Helpful' automatically, since they gave some time to read. If I were ever to receive a truly unhelpful review, I would just ignore it; but since everything is just information, I can't think of any circumstances in which input wouldn't be of some help. Unless it's about adverbs, cuz, fuck adverbs, you know what I mean?

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated January 13, 2013 - 5:23pm

@Kirk - Would upseting people who view formatting as vital, and them leaving, not be the start of the site attracting a lot more people who are focused on writing? I'm joking. Mostly anyway.

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts January 13, 2013 - 7:01pm

@Carly yeah, I think that's probably the best and easiest solution for you, have a back-up to get that kind of workload out. Hopefully you still get enough out of this workshop to stay and use it regularly.

 

Adding a word count field is awesome.

@Jeff I think if you ignore to give someone points for an awful review they get the full 3 points in a week anyway. I usually give 3 points after skimming a review and finding that it has some base form of thought put into it, I'll give the ocassional 2 points when it's obvious they just wanted points. They deserve none, but I don't want to crush their workshop experience. I've noticed more often lately both writers and reviewers pretty much ignoring that "Author's Agenda" section which might help get more consistent reviews if used. It would definitely help weed out the newbie reviewers from the ones that just don't give a shit by giving the newbies a good direction to go to.

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Jonathan Riley from Memphis, Tennessee is reading Flashover by Gordon Highland January 13, 2013 - 7:16pm

I think the writer's agenda is a crucial element in the workshopping experience. I always make sure to let my reader know my own concerns about my work to give them a guide for what type of advice I'm looking for. I also make sure to read other writer's agendas so I can address their own concerns. When there isn't an agenda, or they just ask for general responses, I still do lbl's and just try to point out the portions of the story that don't work for me personally.

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avery of the dead from Kentucky is reading Cipher Sisters January 14, 2013 - 9:31am

report and let a moderator decide.

I decided that is a terrible idea. 

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JEFFREY GRANT BARR from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life January 14, 2013 - 2:12pm

Oh, also more badges/achievements or whatever they are. Those are cooooool. Remember when atari would mail you badges if you took a pic of your high-scoring game? I wish I still had mine.