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aliensoul77 from a cold distant star is reading the writing on the wall. October 18, 2011 - 9:25am

I know we have discussed sexuality and writing sex scenes in other threads so it's time to put your genitals where your mouth is (what?).  I propose everyone write a brief scene, like a flash fiction of a sex scene, it can be sex with a man/woman, woman/woman, man/man, man/woman/woman, mmm, www. wwwmmdonkey, whatever.  This will be our NC-17 thread lol.  I'm just curious how people write sex scenes.  If you want a specific scenario, you could do a first time thing or sex with a one night stand. 

Here is an example.  It's actually not that graphic.  I guess this is an example of how you can be erotic without actually describing penetration.


He walked quietly into the room and I felt the outline of his body in the darkness.

"We shouldn't do this," I said.

"What are you afraid of?"

"What if she finds out?"

"I thought you said your wife was in Chicago."

"She is, I just, I'm not good at lying."

"Then don't lie."  

"It's so easy for you to say."

I took off his shirt and felt his chest.  His stomach was firm and felt tightly packed, just the touch of him set me on fire.  I started to suck on his nipples.

"Do you do this with her?" he asked.

"Shut up," I said.

"Or do you make her suck you off?"

"I said shut up!" I bit his nipple.  He pushed me away angrily.

Then he started to strip off my clothes and I felt him push me to the bed.  He held me down and I was reminded of when I was thirteen and with my best friend Henry.  We had been wrestling when suddenly a strange silence had come between us, that upspoken thing that most people don't want to admit.  He had wrestled me to the ground and was sitting on my chest, his legs spread over me, my head between his thighs.  "This is what you want," he said, "I knew this is what you wanted." His tone was so confident and I felt the hardness of his cock against my cheek through his shorts.  I had pushed him off me and ran.  Now Craig held me down the same way and he knew I liked it.  That feeling of surrender.  I had been trying to relive that moment my entire life. 

"When you fuck me, can I call you Henry?" I asked him.

He laughed and pulled off my pants, "Sure."  I felt his tongue running over the back of my neck. 

"After all, I'll be pretending you are someone else too," he said.


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. October 18, 2011 - 10:27am

Finnally after a week I finished my short story and was ready to post it. Something was wrong. I accidently put a C in front On second thought, the workshop can wait...

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. October 18, 2011 - 10:31am

If isn't taken yet, I may have a new website domain!

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Chester Pane from Portland, Oregon is reading The Brief and Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao by Junot Diaz October 18, 2011 - 9:50pm

Its taken here.

But you have to be willing to tumble.

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simon morris from Originally, Philadelphia, PA; presently Miami Beach, FL is reading This Body of Death, by Elizabeth George October 29, 2011 - 5:44pm

She undressed slowly, and when she was down to a garter belt and stiletto heels, she sprawled upon the bed.

"Well," she said. Why are you just standing there with your fingers rubbing your temples?"

"That's how we do it on my planet," I said, my voice choked with passion.

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aliensoul77 from a cold distant star is reading the writing on the wall. October 29, 2011 - 10:20pm


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JesterOfHearts from Texas is reading Under the Dome - Stephen King October 30, 2011 - 3:49pm

I always find the idea of writing something sexual more appealing than the actual act of writing something sexual.  Shortly after getting started, I tend to get too aroused to focus on writing anymore.  Is this the case for anyone else?  This is also the case with reading sexual scenes.  Sometimes when reading a sexual scene, especially a really descriptive one, I have to take a break and finish reading it later...

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. October 30, 2011 - 4:15pm

Ha I love Irina, thats so great she called it Lady Cunt.