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aliensoul77 from a cold distant star is reading the writing on the wall. November 11, 2011 - 11:13pm

Just in case anyone is not reading the other thread, we are doing write-offs in the workshop, it's called Beyond Thunderdome and we are looking for as many people as possible to review and grade them so we can have a fair amount of reviews.  If you review one, please consider reviewing the other.  The loser has to buy the winner a book of their choice.  If you are motivated by competition, feel free to challenge someone to a write off in the other thread called, "Writer Battle in Litreactor".  All genres can apply.  Must be 18 and over to enter, jk.

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. November 12, 2011 - 9:54am

Mine sucks. Spit on it and call it ugly. It's in to that sort of thing.

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest November 12, 2011 - 10:00am

@Jack... Don't be so hard on yourself. Hell, you had the story posted the same day the challenge was issued. How much could you have possibly gotten done in that one day? Sit back, take a day or two to ruminate, then break the sucker open and revise. You've got time to make it great.

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aliensoul77 from a cold distant star is reading the writing on the wall. November 14, 2011 - 10:49pm

Version 2.0 of my story is up.  All new material past page 7