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Magzftw from Rochester NY is reading Ubik May 23, 2013 - 10:13am

So I have been working on a short story for about a week now and I keep hitting these mental blocks that are starting to make the story feel more and more disjointed. Would someone be able to read through it and give me some advice?

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Covewriter from Nashville, Tennessee is reading & Sons May 23, 2013 - 10:21am

You shouldn't it in the workshop. That always helps me so much.

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Nathan Scalia from Kansas is reading so many things May 23, 2013 - 10:41am

Yeah, workshop it. Then link to it. I'll read it through.

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fport from Canada is reading The World Until Yesterday - Jared Diamond May 26, 2013 - 10:06am

abrahampark are you a bot? I think you are. Magzftw asked for assistance with a story not some disjointed reply using English as a foreign thought process.

Yah, I'd agree - workshop it Magzftw or if not I'll read it.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated June 1, 2013 - 2:04pm

Got to love the bots.