I wrote this story quickly for a friend who is starting a new Zine. I am not happy with it but he is ready to publish "as is" because it is due this week.
I did my own LBL for practice because I had never done one and because I have specific questions regarding parts of the story. The LBL and formatted version is attached to the last post.
I know everyone is busy but any help at all will be very very helpful. I don't want to put out a piece of shit just because my friend wants to fill his Zine.
****sorry if this shouldn't have been a thread, I didn't know how else to beg. :-)