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Courtney from the Midwest is reading Monkey: A Journey to the West and a thousand college textbooks November 27, 2012 - 9:09pm

I like to do this after I finish a short story so I can work it in better during re-writes, but for longer works, I've started considering making these maps earlier so I don't have to start over on the second draft. It's one of the reasons I trashed my first novella, it was incredibly convoluted when I tried to work in more clear references to the motif I modeled the entire story after.

Has anyone here ever tried? Did it help or did it confine you too much? (Also, if it felt confining, do you usually stick well to an outline? I ask because I've noticed I stick much closer to my outlines than most people because I know most of the story before I embark on the outline.)

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OtisTheBulldog from Somerville, MA is reading The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao by Junot Diaz November 27, 2012 - 9:15pm

I very loosely outline. I just recently started doing it. But I'll essentially break things down into acts (1-3) or whatever and sort of plot out events that I want to happen within that structure.

Separately, I'll brainstorm and write out the themes I want to work on.

By then, I'm usually ready to write and put the notebook away and start working away at it. I've noticed I no longer care about the outline after that, nor do I care if I hit on certain things, depending on the way the story is shaping up.

When I go back to revision, I do look at my list of themes. What's changed? What did I miss? What is my story really about and how does that affect the themes? 

That kind of shit.

I've found that it's extremely important to be flexible with an outline, themes, etc. I don't really know what the story is about until after the shitty first draft and I have a little time to think on it.

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Covewriter from Nashville, Tennessee is reading & Sons November 27, 2012 - 9:19pm

For short stories I don't outline, just get a basic outline in my head. But it really is true the characters make the stories turn the way they want. I used to hear other writers say that and think "yeah right," but it is amazing how that happens. One of my characters killed a man once and I didn't even want her to. it's thrilling to me when that happens.

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OtisTheBulldog from Somerville, MA is reading The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao by Junot Diaz November 27, 2012 - 9:24pm

Just today I began brainstorming and working out my idea for my WAR story. I wrote out a few themes I wanted to hit on. I went out, wrote the opening paragraphs, took a break from it and picked it back up earlier tonight.

I finished the first draft and basically, aside from maybe four words, I don't even hit on what I thought would be one of my main themes. It's actually no longer a theme of the story, though I was sure it was when I started it and was walking to get a burrito and thinking about it (burritos make some of the best pre-story meals). 

But yeah, just an example of thinking you have one approach to it, sitting down and letting the story go where it will and realizing you were way off in the beginning when you thought you knew.

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Dino Parenti from Los Angeles is reading Everything He Gets His Hands On November 27, 2012 - 11:15pm

I don't overdo it, but I don't start anything without a theme in mind. Theme affords me symbolism, plot and character. A brief outline, and I'm off. Can't write anything cold-turkey. Tried, but it's gone nowhere. 

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest November 28, 2012 - 2:07am

 I never outline. I like not knowing where the story is going and let my characters determine their own paths, goals and outcomes. This approach can be exhausting and frustrating, but for me, when they lead me to unexpected places, the excitement overrides that frustration.

I write within the noir/pulp genres so my themes usually explore the criminal or hero, how their mind works and the affect they can have on various individuals. But those themes normally don't arise until I have already written the story. I don't really worry about theme and focus on characters and plot. 

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated November 28, 2012 - 8:40am

I do a very broad outline of events sometimes; but I never address theme, plot, or symbols. I just try to make a sandbox for the characters to play in it. I attached a picture of one I did on a dry erase board I keep on my fridge for NaNo.

I also use the form below when I'm not sure what would happen next, and those come closer too addressing those theme, plot, and/or symbols. If you fill in the blanks, pick a word from each list, put x as takes action next, and Y as what they did it sorts itself out quick.

In the land of __________ (choice from 'during' or 'on') _________ X attempts Y (choice from 'successfully', 'unsuccessfully', or 'with mixed results') because they wanted ___________. This causes __________.

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Skygrotto from Southwestern Ontario is reading Europe: A History by Norman Davies November 28, 2012 - 9:05am

I second what Moon wrote.

I write out detailed character descriptions, and determine major plot points, and sometimes minor ones too, and within those details lie themes and motifs. Only once have I ever decided on a motif, and that's with the novel I'm writing. Structure, theme, motif come into play only after I've rewritten the story a few times, and have completed edits. Then they emerge organically, as some would say.

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H.I.Marcuson from Toulouse is reading a book on spelling November 28, 2012 - 9:11am

I dont even think about theme's and motifs. Just story.

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jyh from VA is reading whatever he feels like November 28, 2012 - 9:17am

I write until I stop. I notice things. I miss things.

I tend not to outline. I have done it, but it did not help me at all.

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Andrez Bergen from Melbourne, Australia + Tokyo, Japan is reading 'The Spirit' by Will Eisner November 28, 2012 - 1:13pm

I tend to layer in themes/motifs/symbols after finishing the first manuscript draft.

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Flybywrite from Rocky Point, Long Island is reading The Bride Comes to Yellow Sky, by Stephen Crane November 28, 2012 - 2:18pm

Hi Courtney.   I haven't ever planned out any sort of a thematic landscape in advance, but for the most part it seems with me a thematic concern of some kind or another comes along with the original ideas I have for a protagonist and his or her sitch.  So that can be trouble for me, of the same sort you mentioned experiencing in your novella.  There's been many times that once I've set up a protagonist and the situation they're in, that concerns with abstract matters swamp the story, turn the potentially interesting boring, and I'm not so interested in going through that too many more times.  What chance it might have had to remain dynamic and interesting had I remained live, on the ground, goes dead, once my narration puts its focus too much on menaing and too little on interaction.  So then in scenes in which my narration ought to be more concerned with describing environments and objects and carrying interesting characters from-through-toward their situations at an effective pace, instead come these dead zones in which the narrator is clearly more concerned that every element remain tied to whatever grand metaphorical design.  So for me in the future its always got to be ground up to the elevation of meaning, because I do believe any good book depends on the integration. 

So, it doesn't always go as great as I'd like, but I try my best these days each time out to keep the authorial objectives hidden as deep as possible in the character objectives and there situations.  Or else, it's just so easy to get lost in my own damned soup.  At its worst will appear these tangents full of blocky paragraphs that may have a vague association to the story I started out trying to tell.  Then there's robotic dialog stumping for the genius/ass of a narrator where my real-seeming flesh and blood character should be speaking scene driven, active dialog along the movement.  Anyway, I'm more for laying out a blueprint than ever, and that goes for the metaphorical/symbolic content once you've recognized it, too.  If for no other reason that that I should stay away from any and all direct reference to such things and have my characters shut the hell up about it and get real.  Tanks for the question.      

 

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Bill Tucker from Austin, Texas is reading Grimm's Fairy Tales (1st Edition) November 28, 2012 - 3:37pm

Lately, I've been starting with an issue or feeling I want to express and then just run from there. My Round 1 WAR story was an expression of my girlfriend feeling stuck in her job and my frustration with it. Take that feeling, mix it with the prompt and you get a framework of sorts. But for the most part, the characters drive the theme and the plot. The better developed: the characters, the more the themes crop up.

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G. X. Bradbury from Corvallis, OR is reading The Modern School Movement: Anarchism and Education in the United States, by Paul Arvich May 13, 2013 - 11:39pm

I'm new to the site, so, late to post.

I've been on the fence about outlines for some time. I tossed my last novel idea because of conflicts with outlines and drafts, and sheer aggravation between the two.

This time around I'm trying a different approach, doing what I did as a kid when I was writing: let the story write itself. Or, as previously mentioned here, let it grow organically.

I started with a simple idea for a plot that was quite vague, then let it branch out. I'm not concerning myself with plot holes or inconsistencies, anything of that nature. I just write whatever comes to mind; whatever I think would make for a good chapter in the story regardless of placement.

Here's where it has taken me:

  • I started off with subplots, but now I'm on the verge of dumping them altogether, but I enjoyed writing them and might use it for later stories.
  • New characters have introduced themselves to the story. Meanwhile, I'm nixing characters I introduced to the story, if that makes sense.
  • A murder occurred, and that was never an idea. It just sort of happened. And I'm keeping it.

Now, I feel like I've got a basic idea of where the story is going. It's like a bundle of random and seemingly chaotic ideas, but the parts that make sense start popping out and fitting together, making it easier to take out the trash. And so, NOW, I feel like I can formulate and outline. A simple one, divided into beginning, middle, and end.

For example, under "Beginning" I'll do a synopsis of the events that take place, leading up to the major climax of the story. The "Middle" will include the climax and the beginning to cool down.The "End" will be...the end.

I don't know if this would work every time, but so far, it's working wonders for me, keeping me entertained with my own writing, enjoying the process and craft, and allowing myself creative space over stuffy rules and/or guidelines.