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CharlieBonesman November 19, 2011 - 11:11am

Hello all,

    I've been writing a story about a murderer in the 1800s. There are some dark comedic elements, some light hearted scenes, and some grim death. I'm having trouble maintaining a steady tone.

It seems I'm bouncing around between writing that's too dark in tone and writing that's too light-hearted. 

I was hoping to get some recommendations for research. If you've read some books that have a nice balance of murder/death and laughter, I'd love to hear what they are.

 

Thanks much,

Charlie

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Bradley Sands from Boston is reading Greil Marcus's The History of Rock 'N' Roll in Ten Songs November 20, 2011 - 12:56pm

Jeff Strand is an author who writes humorous horror. Might be worth checking out. Graverobbers Wanted (No Experience Necessary) is the only one book of his that read. A few Carlton Mellick 3 books may fit as well such as Zombies and Shit and Apeshit. I'm amused that both those titles have "shit" in them considering he has published so many books and those are the only two with the word in the title.

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cowboywerewolf from DC is reading Homage to Catalonia November 20, 2011 - 1:19pm

Vonnegut is always a good starting point for combining darkness and humor. Mother Night and Slaughterhouse Five, specifically. Less Than Zero and Rules of Engagement by Brett Easton Ellis get emotionally dark and have a very bitter humor to them.

If you want something more period appropriate, though, you can't go wrong with Oscar Wilde. The Picture of Dorian Gray is a quick read, dark and, since it's Wilde, has plenty of humor.

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R.Moon from The City of Champions is reading The Last Thing He Wanted by Joan Didion; Story Structure Architect by Victoria Lynn Schimdt PH.D; Creating Characters by the editors of Writer's Digest November 20, 2011 - 1:54pm

@Cowboy: That's Rules of Attraction, Bud. Sorry, Bret be my favorite...

@Charles: I like Hell by Robert Olen Butler and I, Lucifer by Glen Duncan. Both funny, yet dark.

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. November 20, 2011 - 2:16pm

I agree with Rules but add American Psycho to that list. Chuck Palahniuk (his early books). Brandon Tietz, Nik Korpon and Craig Clevenger all have pretty good books. A lot of the books on The Velvet really. William S. Burroghs of course.

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Renfield from Hell is reading 20th Century Ghosts November 20, 2011 - 2:22pm

Joe R. Lansdale.

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dalis_lips from no place in particular is reading *health psychology* November 20, 2011 - 3:33pm

Despair by Nabokov

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Melody November 20, 2011 - 7:05pm

Deadeye Dick by Vonnegut, it's a quick read and often overlooked.

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Dean Blake from Australia is reading generationend.com November 21, 2011 - 5:21am

Twilight, Twilight: Eclipse, Twilight: New Moon, Twilight: Breaking Dawn.

 

(Seriously: As well as those mentioned in this thread, Woody Allen's Insanity Defence also has some humorous short stories.)

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postpomo from Canada is reading words words words November 21, 2011 - 7:02am

the Wimbledon Poisoner by Nigel Williams (more humour than dark, but there's murder going on)

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Melody November 21, 2011 - 7:08am

How could I forget Angela's Ashes. It's a sad story all together, but a hilarious read.

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HeHe Leakes from Dixie November 22, 2011 - 11:38am

I am reading Practical Jane by Thomas Cole. It's a very dark comedy

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JonnyGibbings December 27, 2011 - 7:52am
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Profunda Saint-... from Calgary, AB is reading Hitchiker's Guide to the Galaxy Series December 27, 2011 - 11:27am

Definitely agree with the Vonnegut mentions, he's wonderful.

DBC Pierre's  Vernon God Little  is one of my all time favourite dark comedies. I recommend it to pretty much anyone.

Tom Robbins' Still Life with Woodpecker  and all of his other books that I've read were sort of in the same vein, and super enjoyable.

Also anything by Chris Walter (www.punkbooks.com) is a great mix of comedy, tragedy and just plain rock n roll. My favourites are Boozecan and East Van, but I haven't read one that I didn't like. Really raw style, fast read, too.

The Death Of Bunny Munro  from Nick Cave is fun, too, in a fairly sadistic way.

I'd have to go home and look at my bookcase to remember what else I've enjoyed, but check some of those out.

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Dave Hanson from Connecticut is reading Incredibly pulpy fantasy and sci-fi December 27, 2011 - 11:32am

I, Lucifer by Glen Duncan. Basically God gives the devil a shot at redemption and living in a mortal body. Hilarity ensues.

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aliensoul77 from a cold distant star is reading the writing on the wall. December 27, 2011 - 10:13pm

Read my story in the workshop called, "Merry Christmas Satan!", it's dark comedy lol ;)  I think its fun.

Most Kurt Vonnegut stuff is dark comedy.

I just bought Death of Bunny Monroe for 3 bucks off barnesandnoble.com.  They are having a year end booksale of a large selection of their hardbacks 3-4 dollars.  Just fyi. 

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. December 27, 2011 - 11:35pm

I have a dark story on Solarcide. 

I'll have to say J.G. Ballard.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. December 28, 2011 - 10:28am

The third novel-lenght story I wrote (I hesitate to call it a novel) was called A Very Dark Comedy as a placeholder for a real title.  This was back in '04 or so.  It's about a man in the middle of an identity crisis when he finds out his father was a serial killer/rapist and then decides to follow in daddy's footsteps.

I really should rewrite that.  I won't.  But I should.