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Well done, JR, well done. You're right, that one will be fun to expand. Very cool concept.
One thing we haven't mentioned, do we set a deadline for voting?
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I can't figure out how to post pics in here. For anyone who reads, the prompt was a nasty-ass drained indoor pool with about a foot of brownish-black water and a wheelchair in the deep end. Plus graffetti on the walls.
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Just FYI, guys: it might be a good idea to repost these files in .doc format. There are still some cave-people out there who have trouble with the .docx files.
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Man, I totally want to dish on what I thought of those two marvelous stories, but I'll wait till the voting is in. Regardless, way cool, the both of you. There is some very good writing there, and I'm glad I didn't go to battle with either one of you.
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Thanks, Utah. Looking forward to your battle.
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Somebody look at that tally with a different set of eyes. A moment ago the count was 4-3, and now it's 4-2. Am I seeing that right, or just going nuts?
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Clarification: I have the super-hero ability of being able to see the actual votes, and I can verify there are seven votes on this poll at the moment.
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After I voted there was a 7 count. I'll send a message to Kirk and see if he can straighten it out.
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Great stories, you two! Damn. Well done!
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Nice stories guys, great prompt Sarah.
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Thanks ladies!
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Great stories guys. Funny thing though, I had a serious hankering for a Whopper after I finished reading.
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Good work, guys!
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Bump
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FYI, the vote tally issue is now corrected and accurate.
Kirk...wherever you are, thanks.
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Love these both! Great work, gents!
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Thanks Dino
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Close battle!
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Fantastic stories, guys. Loved both.
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Well done fellas!! I voted!!
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thanks sound and leah. bump!
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Bump
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Bump up the jams, bump it up, or I'll slice your eyelids off.
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bump
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The bump pics might just be the funnest part of this...
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Bump!
@SP: I love it when you get rough!
@R. Moon: are you holding the pointer?
I really love this community of crazy writers!
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We so craycray!!!
Oh, and I will bump yo shit straight up, mofos!
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Awesome stories guys!
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i believe this will also be of use to the cavedwellers who doth shun docx files
http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/download/details.aspx?id=3
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Bump.
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Happy Father's Day bump to all you Dads!
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So, this one's about to wrap up, and here's a recap:
First, JR seemed surprised and a bit overwhelmed at my challenge.
Second, JR gets sick during the writing phase.
Third, he beats me soundly!
I'd hate to see what he can do heatlhy and with no surprise challenge involved! Well done, JR!
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Close fights are the best!
Congrats JR :)
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I thought you both wrote great stories -- I really enjoyed them!
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Congratulations to both you guys. I really liked both stories. Doug, I loved the voice you used in yours, as well as obvious polish and technical proficiency. You wrote a helluva clean piece of work in a week. You're a really awesome writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Jonathan, your piece was really trippy. There's a lot of room to grow with that one. The piece wasn't as cleaned up as Doug's, and that did initially throw me. Typically, I'll vote for the cleaner of the stories by default. However, your story really blew me away with a couple characters I liked, and with a premise the fulfilled a lot of potential and promised a lot more, and so it got my vote. So, good job. I'd love to see what this one turns into.
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Thanks Utah!
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Great stories guys! Enjoyed reading both of them. I'll say though, Doug your story reminded of something Gillian Flynn might write. There was a dark, ominous feeling that was steady throughout the piece. Nicely done.
Jonathan, what I really liked about yours was the voice of the story. Great conversational tone. It was real, consistent, and very well done. Great job!
There were a lot of things I liked about both of the stories, but for the sake of brevity, those are the things that stuck out most to me.
Excellent job, fellas!
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Thanks Moon!
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