Dwayne
from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updatedApril 11, 2013 - 9:32pm
Jon, you could just have the daughter and mother get sick of him and leave, say he isn't any fun. Much less expected, and really makes him seem sad in a way that death doesn't.
Technically it's sloths, but I wasn't sure. I had to look it up. However, I decided amidst the looking-up-of-the-word-process that my personal preference would have been slothi.
Frank, I voted for Jonathan but I super enjoyed the originality in your piece and it captured my imagination. I feel like you cracked open a fissure into something pretty cool. Like visiting the local public pool and discovering the third end. There's the deep end, the shallow end, and only you can see that third end, but just what is it exactly? And is it a safe dive?
Frank Chapel
from California is reading Thomas Ligotti's worksApril 11, 2013 - 11:18pm
Thanks Michael, and Courtney. I read my story again today and noticed all the blunders. I will polish it up in the near future, add a bit more character depth, and see about what else might need improving. Worshop it maybe.
This was my first Thunderdome battle and it was great to be apart of it.
Jonathan Riley
from Memphis, Tennessee is reading Flashover by Gordon Highland April 14, 2013 - 12:22pm
@dwayne if by closed you mean noone else can vote on the poll, it has been closed since thursday around 7:00. If you mean something else i,m not sure what. people can still comment, i dont see any reason to close that even if I could. Also, I took the documents down thursday. not sure what else you want me to close.
Jon, you could just have the daughter and mother get sick of him and leave, say he isn't any fun. Much less expected, and really makes him seem sad in a way that death doesn't.
Technically it's sloths, but I wasn't sure. I had to look it up. However, I decided amidst the looking-up-of-the-word-process that my personal preference would have been slothi.
Frank, I voted for Jonathan but I super enjoyed the originality in your piece and it captured my imagination. I feel like you cracked open a fissure into something pretty cool. Like visiting the local public pool and discovering the third end. There's the deep end, the shallow end, and only you can see that third end, but just what is it exactly? And is it a safe dive?
Only one way to find out.
Thanks Michael, and Courtney. I read my story again today and noticed all the blunders. I will polish it up in the near future, add a bit more character depth, and see about what else might need improving. Worshop it maybe.
This was my first Thunderdome battle and it was great to be apart of it.
You've balls I don't.
You don't see me challenging for fights, that at least for me, I'm likely to publicly lose.
Never say never though.
Shouldn't this be closed?
@dwayne if by closed you mean noone else can vote on the poll, it has been closed since thursday around 7:00. If you mean something else i,m not sure what. people can still comment, i dont see any reason to close that even if I could. Also, I took the documents down thursday. not sure what else you want me to close.
I meant the poll. Most time the topic name is edited, and this one wasn't.
Got ya. I'll edit it. Thanks for letting me know.