wenderella383
I made revisions. Please let me know what you think of my poem. Thank you!
ninjaskillz
A long metaphor I wrote when I was starting a new relationship and my brother was dying. It is more my feelings than anything coherent.
Amanda Tveidt
Three poems written in the past month.
All deal with semi mature themes
Strange Photon
This is a group of five poems I'm refining, to eventually choose up to three which I will submit for a poetry exhibition/contest. Each is under a page long, so an easy way to earn review points.
Rod Mance
The tale of a horrible place, that's all. It's a free verse poem with changing meter and rhyme scheme.
Nathan Scalia
The story-poem of Pawn, and his blasphemous decision to change how the game was played.
jutley
This is a poem that discusses the intricacies of finding a certain type of happiness.
Nicolo Cassidy
Not too sure who here is into poetry but here are four short poems I've been working on lately.
Bookie
These are seven poems I've picked from a collection of my writings. All criticism is welcome.
Bookie
A couple of nontraditional poems. Neither rhyme, but it is honesty in practice.
Strange Photon
After reading and reviewing some poems by writers here, I wanted to toss my tattered hat in the ring for a good beating.
Amcii Cullum
Someone has love and lost and now has to go on in what seems like a dream.
Amcii Cullum
A poem I wrote for my lifelong love where made-up words, in context, can make sense. If you do not agree, please comment. I would love some feedback. This is a very old poem I wrote.
beardown247
This is a poem about happiness being a lot simpler than we perceive it. With many poor attempts at humor tossed in.
nickerickson
There is a timelessness in the challenge of going to sea, even in our current safe days, the sea is big and all consuming.
15 Points
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