I recently finished the thirteenth draft of Voreth's Promise Saga, now with the title rewritten as Episodic Life Of Nadine Melville. While it's technically a novella, it is structured as two novelettes across different eras of the MCs life.
Would it be better to make them individually, or as a duology?
The story while essentially the same, has evolved to have a good bit more nuance than it did at first by making everything first person multiple. The reasoning being that first person gets inside the head of the MCs better.
It's bit like if you have one story about the MC dating one lady in the first half, and they are dating another lady in the second half. But neither are the same story.
It was dystopian, but the elements are barely noticeable now.
