bryanhowie
Story is in rewrite. No more reviews needed. Thank you all.
Flash fiction from War round 3 (the pit). About getting over heartache.
Todd Sullivan
1st line: I opened my eyes to Song Ji Hun crouched on the edge of my bed.
bryanhowie
Part 3 of 3. The story of a little girl and a horrible grandmother, and a caretaker who comes to help.
neojonez
Luke is a novel about crime, sex and violence and other hobbies popular in and around Las Vegas. 2,800 words.
Sound
Inspired by Carly's Monday Flash Fiction prompt: Afterlife. Javier finds Jesus.
bryanhowie
Part 2 of 3. The story of a little girl and a horrible grandmother, and a caretaker who comes to help.
TomMartinArt
1,522 words of something or other. Inspired by a photo I took of my niece. I hesitate to say much else.
Renfield
a film critic writes a review of a freakin weird movie
Lawrence
A psychological horror story inspired by Lovecraft and set in modern day. A tale of a young boy trying to find his purpose in life. (2,000 words)
Michael Gleich
A family of witches own a successful organic winery in Sonoma. In these first two chapters, the main characters are brought out. Morty will play an important role later on. W.C. 3,747
rebelbagwan
Set at the Hard Knocks Slaughterhouse, "The Maverick" assisted by "The Steed" is called out to stop a breakout by Happy Hammond (the steer)and the turncoat and subversive conspirator "Nutsy".
fport
I set my first story off into the wild and got some really good advice.
It was unrefined and the result of one pass writing, that's how it burbled out.
This one has been corrected with that advice.
fioreous
Jay and Syl's marital troubles are put on hold during an apparent armed robbery in their local diner.
bryanhowie
I've gotten lots of critiques for this. No need for more, but if you read it to get to the next part, leave a quick comment and rating to get points.
Todd Sullivan
1st line: Penetration, deep into her guts, speared Kim Jung Hyun.
David Hanson
Jeremiah Wolfe is a mercenary in a near future, and has just agreed to the job of his life.
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