David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An introduction to a very large world where the reader is introduced to two hunters (not too much is revealed about them), but through their experiences you are introduced to a post apocalyptic world!
jyh
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
First chapter of a fantasy story. (got enough)
Devon Robbins
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Rough first chapter of a psychological/horror novel I'm working on. Sarah is a woman that has been haunted since she was a kid. Her paranoia is getting worse. She can't define the lines of reality.
Stephen
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Chapter one of the novel Heroic
David Puerner
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
An opening chapter of a longer piece, where we learn of a horrifying secret about Mia Woolfe's past. Strangeness is foreshadowed. And just what is this "connection?" Hope you enjoy it.
Pushpaw
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Edward's life is boring, useless and weird. Here's some of it.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
The first 2 chapters of a novel I've been working on. 2.7k words
ashleyarabian
In: Novel Excerpt 10 reviews
This is the first couple chapters of my first novel. The novel is about a 15 year old girl who obtains a stalking habit for a music teacher 2X her age. It's a coming of age/sexual awakening story.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
In the previous chapter Stan discovers an electricity between him and Holly, but Holly's best friend Chloe creates a dilemma for Stan. This chapter finds Stan dealing with his dilemma. 3,222 words.
Courtney
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
RoaringJen
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
George Boardway has been in love with Deanne for quite some time. Deanne is a single mom who happens to be a sushi chef. He finally tells her. This is just a prologue.
Tim Barker
In: Novel Excerpt 7 reviews
It's about a man who has tried, and failed, to commit suicide 136 times. The book is called 137. This section is 1780 words and it's a black absurd comedy.
Jeremy Bustin
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
COLOR ME CRAZY is the account of a schizophrenic patient whom suffers from ombrophobia, the fear of rain or being rained upon. There are two things that set Patrick off--rain and the color red.
ergoego
In: Novel Excerpt 2 reviews
In the previous chapter a Jesuit had counseled Stan to go find a good Catholic girl, get married and dedicate his 1st born son to be a priest. Stan visits his aunt in Savanna & meets Holly at church.
Praxus
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
This is the first chapter of a standard mystery novel with a detective, sidekick, and a MacGuffin. Everyone is introduced.
Dwayne
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
How does this work as a intro to an alternative history book? 2369 words
Matt Attack
In: Novel Excerpt 6 reviews
This submission has been removed. Still in progress, but have everything I need. Thanks again for looking!
Typewriter Demigod
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Love, honour and violence in high school. 6.5k words.
jdudley
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Overlong prologue for a potential Fantasy/Adventure novel
rightcharlee
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
Faith, trust, and some experimental pixie dust (2,150 words).
Typewriter Demigod
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Girls in love in highschool in Devon.
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 3 reviews
Seth awakes in the early morning of the hotel. With a hardcore hangover, he forces himself to find his buddy Rob to leave. But Rob isn't the only thing he find, San Diego is overrun with Zombies
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
Slacker Seth Walsh wakes up to a call from his exe. After she pisses him off he decides to join a friend at a hotel party. Everything is going great until Seth finds out his drink has been spiked.
Nick Wilczynski
In: Novel Excerpt 4 reviews
The second section of my novel. Also a little more than 5,000 words. Please read Section 1 first.
Bobby Detrick
In: Novel Excerpt 5 reviews
INFAMY follows a self-absorbed slacker who becomes city tour guild for a drug lord, but not until after finding a baby. This trio makes for the perfect storm mixed up in a zombie filled San Diego