An introduction to a very large world where the reader is introduced to two hunters (not too much is revealed about them), but through their experiences you are introduced to a post apocalyptic world!
First chapter of a fantasy story. (got enough)
Rough first chapter of a psychological/horror novel I'm working on. Sarah is a woman that has been haunted since she was a kid. Her paranoia is getting worse. She can't define the lines of reality.
Chapter one of the novel Heroic
An opening chapter of a longer piece, where we learn of a horrifying secret about Mia Woolfe's past. Strangeness is foreshadowed. And just what is this "connection?" Hope you enjoy it.
The Unwritten Life of Edward Gillis-Moore (novel excerpt, 3000 words, removed due to crappiness...and back again)
Edward's life is boring, useless and weird. Here's some of it.
The first 2 chapters of a novel I've been working on. 2.7k words
This is the first couple chapters of my first novel. The novel is about a 15 year old girl who obtains a stalking habit for a music teacher 2X her age. It's a coming of age/sexual awakening story.
In the previous chapter Stan discovers an electricity between him and Holly, but Holly's best friend Chloe creates a dilemma for Stan. This chapter finds Stan dealing with his dilemma. 3,222 words.
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
George Boardway has been in love with Deanne for quite some time. Deanne is a single mom who happens to be a sushi chef. He finally tells her. This is just a prologue.
It's about a man who has tried, and failed, to commit suicide 136 times. The book is called 137. This section is 1780 words and it's a black absurd comedy.
COLOR ME CRAZY is the account of a schizophrenic patient whom suffers from ombrophobia, the fear of rain or being rained upon. There are two things that set Patrick off--rain and the color red.
In the previous chapter a Jesuit had counseled Stan to go find a good Catholic girl, get married and dedicate his 1st born son to be a priest. Stan visits his aunt in Savanna & meets Holly at church.
This is the first chapter of a standard mystery novel with a detective, sidekick, and a MacGuffin. Everyone is introduced.
How does this work as a intro to an alternative history book? 2369 words
This submission has been removed. Still in progress, but have everything I need. Thanks again for looking!
Love, honour and violence in high school. 6.5k words.
Overlong prologue for a potential Fantasy/Adventure novel
Faith, trust, and some experimental pixie dust (2,150 words).
Girls in love in highschool in Devon.
Seth awakes in the early morning of the hotel. With a hardcore hangover, he forces himself to find his buddy Rob to leave. But Rob isn't the only thing he find, San Diego is overrun with Zombies
Slacker Seth Walsh wakes up to a call from his exe. After she pisses him off he decides to join a friend at a hotel party. Everything is going great until Seth finds out his drink has been spiked.
The second section of my novel. Also a little more than 5,000 words. Please read Section 1 first.
INFAMY follows a self-absorbed slacker who becomes city tour guild for a drug lord, but not until after finding a baby. This trio makes for the perfect storm mixed up in a zombie filled San Diego