Cameron Key
Poe Lively and his two brothers discover a mysterious video filmed by their 'run away' parents which sends them on a quest for answers.
Gabrielle
This is a troubled teen narrative on what schizophrenia feels like. The narrator describes in depth her history and eventual descent into madness. Excerpt from larger novel that needs a lot of work.
neojonez
Artie and Cecil head into the desert, guys with guns close behind. Artie is on a mission. Cecil just wants to stay alive.
neojonez
First Chapter of my novel Luke, now revised thanks to feedback from Litreactorites. Thank you! Sex, violence, Vegas, literary pretension and other fun things. I will post Chapter Two soon.
Stratton
I've reworked the opening chapters from my multiple POV manuscript. Chapter 1 POV is a 19 year old with Aspergers. Chapter 2 is a slutty 40 year old.
neojonez
Luke is a novel about crime, sex and violence and other hobbies popular in and around Las Vegas. 2,800 words.
Michael Gleich
A family of witches own a successful organic winery in Sonoma. In these first two chapters, the main characters are brought out. Morty will play an important role later on. W.C. 3,747
David Hanson
Jeremiah Wolfe is a mercenary in a near future, and has just agreed to the job of his life.
Gosh Darn My Life
A cranky old man, Arthur Graves, watches a little television, heats up leftovers and internalizes the frustrations of age on the night he dies.
Flybywrite
After learning of his wife’s third pregnancy, a failing horror writer Owen St. Croix hallucinates a trio of crows have become his mentors and that he is destined to write the horror of the century.
Stratton
This excerpt introduces Mona, the promiscuous 39 year old seeking away to better the world in her own way.
rightcharlee
In love with his younger sister, a boy celebrates his graduation with the family when a curious telephone call comes in (3,000 words)
travel_girl
First 2500 words of a YA novel I'm writing. Set in East Texas. Farms and bonfires and dancing and whiskey and good ol' country drama.
Tom1960
At the end of her first day at her new job Jill has an adventure in a bus station.
lspieller
This is chapter 17 of my YA novel. I'd love to hear whatever feedback you have, but im particularly interested in characterization.
Eden Dalia
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Tom1960
While doing their weekly laundry Alison and Kenny meet a mysterious couple. Something from Alison's past is revealed.
pkanom
Marcus deals with the prospect of death as all hell breaks lose and the Nihil Batallion invades his compound.
Eden Dalia
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Stratton
This book has written from two points of view. This is the introduction to Reade, a 19 year old with a yet-to-be disclosed psych disorder who contributes to society in an unusual way.
Tom1960
This is a revision of chapter six. Alison recounts her last day at her regular job. She plays a prank on the wrong person and suffers the consequences.
pkanom
An early chapter giving a general description of characters and general conflict on my book project. It focuses' on an otherwise common morning for the main character, showing a bit of his worldview.
lspieller
Sixteen year old Carly has a hard time juggling family life and her personal life when she finds out that she's not *EXACTLY* human.
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