Amanda Tveidt
Three poems written in the past month.
All deal with semi mature themes
R.Moon
Naomi moves from Indianapolis to L.A. to find her mother.
amERICan psycho
A man finds himself afflicted with uncontainable laughter when others around him are about to die.
Flybywrite
A failing author experiences a fantasy about about an aging, wounded,deposed silverback monarch's attempt to win back his clan, and decides to attack his ex-wife's baby shower in a similar fashion.
Ahti Ahde
A TV-reality star goes through a life changing experience.
pbzona
A small town farmer tries to finish a project he believes was assigned to him by God. 3088 words.
Stratton
I've reworked the opening chapters from my multiple POV manuscript. Chapter 1 POV is a 19 year old with Aspergers. Chapter 2 is a slutty 40 year old.
bryanhowie
Story is finished. No more reviews necessary. Thank you all for your help and guidance.
flem4life
Surveillance from Megan's mother can only keep her danger-free for so long. Megan embarks on a coming-of-age journey walking the tightrope line of the word 'consensual'.
Ahti Ahde
A trasngressive take on beauty. Lawyer, whore, cops and a rich pig.
Ahti Ahde
Rock-lifestyle flavored story of ever failing addiction of longing for being loved. Also my debut. (6500 words, unfortunately can't slice this)
Stratton
This excerpt introduces Mona, the promiscuous 39 year old seeking away to better the world in her own way.
Tom1960
At the end of her first day at her new job Jill has an adventure in a bus station.
Cameron Crump
A young man, defined by his scars, make a connection with a complicated and troubled young woman.
Courtney
No more reviews are needed on this submission.
Eden Dalia
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Tom1960
While doing their weekly laundry Alison and Kenny meet a mysterious couple. Something from Alison's past is revealed.
Eden Dalia
Raves, drugs and sex prove deficient remedies for troubled roommates Lilly, Robbie and Jen until a night of deadly debauchery wreaks havoc on the chemistry fueling their defective lives.
Stratton
This book has written from two points of view. This is the introduction to Reade, a 19 year old with a yet-to-be disclosed psych disorder who contributes to society in an unusual way.
Tom1960
This is a revision of chapter six. Alison recounts her last day at her regular job. She plays a prank on the wrong person and suffers the consequences.
Sound
Under the crushing weight of debt, Leo moves through the night with purpose. (2300 words)
Stratton
A hard-edged 39 year old with a reputation of running through men, has been surprisingly wooed by a mysterious new man, so much so that she has accepted his marriage proposal after just 2 months.
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