Tom.Brewer
Bouncer Paul Marshall does a job for the local crime boss. He learns this job isn't what he thought.
Nathan Scalia
Dean hires a prostitute possessing a very special talent.
Bill Tucker
This is the final version of the rough I submitted last week. If you read the rough, this is has a different slant to it. A poll will be going up soon so all ya'll can vote for the victor.
averydoll
A wife plots her revenge on a cheating husband.
Kiltocopter
This is the beginning chapters of Always, a 70,000 word novel I've been working on for about a year. Not sure on the genre but I'm calling it a romantic suspense.
Biscuit Welsh
First chapter of Honcho, my 80K Hardboiled YA Suspense novel. Kieran Quinn, a sixteen year old wannabe tough guy goes out to the park and gets the news his best friend has been killed
bryanhowie
This story has been rewritten. No need for further critiques. A woman scorned tries to get her husband to remember the promises he made in their youth.
Jake Huber
An alcoholic is watching an episode of Jeopardy while his girlfriend attempts to tell him some important news. And then she finds a gun. (1,600 words)
Instag8r
After taking all of your incredible feedback into consideration, here is the rewrite of Starling: Open Wounds that I posted a few days ago.
Instag8r
The prologue to a novel that I am currently writing. It's about an FBI agent on the rebound and a serial killer returning from the past to cause terror and inflict more damage. (1660 words)
Chorlie
When do you realize that a bartender is still a stranger? How about the other patrons? No one ever knows when it is their last drink, but they do remember it.
J.S. Wright
A man's moments of reflection after spending the night in a stranger's hotel room, out in the middle of nowhere.
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