Trent and Patrick have the perfect plan to loot from the elderly in an older community. They may have bitten off more than they can chew, when they encounter Miss Petunia Butterhole.
Most of the spelling and grammar errors have been addressed. And I deleted some of the weirder wordings. None of the structural issues have changed yet. If anyone spots any misspelled words in this draft and doesn't mind pointing them out that would be great. 6/29/14