Bump!
Thanks to all who have read and voted. It's a super tight race and a huge turnout for day one of the fight. The poll is setup to run for a week so the .doc attachments will be up until around midnight Sunday (Or something like that) Keep em coming, anyone could take this battle!
These were good stories, all really well written.
Cats for Ginger had great atmosphere with this creeping sense of foreboding throughout the piece that I enjoyed. I'd like the plot to be a bit more obvious though, as I didn't feel like I 100% understood what was going on.
I liked the sorta Thelma and Louise vibe I got from A Gap In the Market. And holy shit, did I not expect that ending! Didn't like the kid, so his sticky ending was kinda satisfying. I know you guys had word constraints, but I would have loved that last scene slowed down so I could wring a little more satisfaction from it.
There were parts of Sawed Off Choctaw that really made me laugh, which is always fun. I like how it goes in a really different direction to what you expect. The last two sentences could be a little tighter, I think, but still a lot of fun.
They were all great stories, so I'm going to be a pain in the ass and think about them tonight, then vote tomorrow.
I like all three of these stories quite a bit, which I assumed I would looking at who the writers were. It was tough vote, but I ultimately went with "A Gap In the Market" because I really liked the scenario and the set up. My vote could have gone any of the three ways, but I felt that one hit just a little harder.
Poll has officially closed and is updated with the participants names by their stories. Thanks for pllaying guys. Congrats to Sound. Greatt Battle, it was a tight three-way race for a while. And no One person had the fewest amount of votes so in my mind I didn't lose lol. Neither did Em.
Thanks also to all who read and voted. Keep on Keepin on.
