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Hector Acosta from Dallas is reading Fletch August 18, 2012 - 1:28pm

Am I the only one?

Personally, I don't really look at it when reading over my reviews, and always struggle with it when doing reviews, because I don't know if the person I'm reading cares about them, and will get upset that I gave them a four instead of five.

So anyways, what's your take on the stars?

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Pretty Spry for... August 18, 2012 - 1:37pm

I think that, if the star system is to be kept, the categories need to be changed. Something as subjetive as "concept" counts for 25% percent of the overall rating, yet reviewers have no way (except in their own words, of course) of voicing their opinions on the prose in a given submission, for instance.
And this is a writer's workshop! Shouldn't the writing enter the equation somewhere?

I definitely think changes should be made, Hector.

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Nick from Toronto is reading Adjustment Day August 18, 2012 - 1:44pm

I think there was a discussion on this before... my take is that the star system is a bit silly. Assigning a quantitative value to something so subjective just doesn't make sense, especially when the people giving the rating aren't necessarily qualified to do so (as opposed to a publication's book or film critic giving out star ratings).  I'd prefer honest feedback about what works and what doesn't, without my work being rated against anyone else's, which is essentially what a star rating system does.

Instead of a star rating system, I'd prefer an option for a reviewer to add a "recommended" tag to any story he or she reviews. That way, people browsing can have the option of looking for something considered really good, or something that needs a bit more feedback.

Personally, I'll know my work is good if it gets accepted by a legit publication. Otherwise, it needs polish.

@ Bret, that's a great point... prose doesn't seem to count...

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ReneeAPickup from Southern California is reading Wanderers by Chuck Wendig August 18, 2012 - 1:47pm

Nick--by your theory, then the people writing the reviews aren't really qualified to write the critique, either.

The star system is subjective, yes. But so is everything else in the workshop. It doesn't mean much beyond what that individual thought of your story, but neither do the reviews you get. I don't have any problem with them. A good review will focus on what brought them to the star rating they gave you (even if they don't come out and say it) and the categories give new reviewers something to think about while they are critiquing and writing their review.

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Nick from Toronto is reading Adjustment Day August 18, 2012 - 1:59pm

@ Sparrow... I just think that a star rating tries to apply a concrete, objective value to someone's own personal opinion.

I'm not really keen on movie reviewers giving star ratings, either, so it's not just about qualifications... that was just an example.

Maybe a better way of approaching it:  what function does a star rating serve, as far as helping the person receiving the review? If some part of a story needs work, the review can state that in detail.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. August 18, 2012 - 3:50pm

I think we start talking about stars on page 3.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated August 18, 2012 - 5:01pm

I don't mind them, although I think maybe one or two more rating groups wouldn't hurt. Maybe a drop down that is unrelated to the overall rating.

My big complaint is reviews don't seem to know how to use the star rating. In the LBL they write, "Oh, I loved the concept! It was ordinal, vibrant, imaginative, best idea I've seen in years!" and then give it a 1 or a 2 star rating in concept. Or, "Decent writing, horrid concept," and give it a 3. I know it's subjective, but 1 should be really bad, 2 should be bad, 3 should be mediocre, 4 should be good, 5 should be great. I don't feel like I'm out on a limb here.

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Sound from Azusa, CA is reading Greener Pastures by Michael Wehunt August 18, 2012 - 6:19pm

Personally, I don't mind the star rating when receiving, but I do have a hard time rating someone else's work. I'm aware a low score may affect how many others decide to read a review with low star ratings, and although I don't quite mind it when it's my work, I know some others may put more thought into the star ratings they receive.

I agree with many on here about not really liking the Concept rating. I don't know how others rate this, but I tend to rate it on a scale as far as its originality. Yet...not much nowadays is trully original and a low concept rating can adversely affect the overall score. Now I just rate this as a 3 stars just so I don't hurt the overall score, and lower if it's just a collection of cliches. 

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Hector Acosta from Dallas is reading Fletch August 18, 2012 - 6:21pm

I guess I'm wondering what the main point of the the star ratings are for. I would think that just reading a person's critique, you would be able to get a good sense of what their thoughts/enjoyment of the story was. And if someone leaves a vague enough critique that you have to rely on the stars, can you really take their one, or five, star seriously? It just feels a bit strange to rank stuff at a workshop-a writing even thing like the Scare Us challenge seems much better suited for it.

 

It's not a deal breaker or anything, I was just curious how people use the stars.

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avery of the dead from Kentucky is reading Cipher Sisters August 18, 2012 - 6:36pm

I don't like you.

I'm kidding. 

I love the stars.  For me, personally, it gives me a general idea of how it was received at a glance, without having to read your stupid  brilliant critiques. That's what it is for me, a snapshot.

 

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Michael J. Riser from CA, TX, Japan, back to CA is reading The Tyrant - Michael Cisco, The Devil Takes You Home - Gabino Iglesias August 18, 2012 - 6:41pm

I basically don't even look at the stars. They're pretty much worthless because they don't really mean anything. You can love a story and still think it's absolutely plauged with problems, so stars don't really help. Dialogue in pitch might be great, but the writing might be off, or the voice, or whatever. Stars can't tell you that.

I think Dwayne's suggestion of a couple more rating groups is solid. What's there seems a touch skeletal, and as of now, you can't even get an accurate score for a story with no dialogue, so it might be nice if categories could be removed as well.

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avery of the dead from Kentucky is reading Cipher Sisters August 18, 2012 - 6:46pm

"They're pretty much worthless because they don't really mean anything."

So's your face.

But honestly, every review, no matter how detailed, is subjective and can be considered just as worthless.  We've had this very debate about 5 times that I can remember, and I never understand why people get so sad about it.  If you don't like it, just ignore it. 

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ReneeAPickup from Southern California is reading Wanderers by Chuck Wendig August 18, 2012 - 7:34pm

I use it like Avery, an at a glance to get me ready for what's coming. I also know where to really pay attention in the review/LBL if I see a low star rating on something--especially if I see it over and over again.

And, although the workshop has a lot of members, I do get reviews from the same people a lot, and if I remember that they rated my dialogue as a three the last two times and a four this time, I know that if I have been taking their commentary to heart, I'm making progress.

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Sound from Azusa, CA is reading Greener Pastures by Michael Wehunt August 18, 2012 - 8:00pm

@Avery & Renee: I guess I can see that. I guess, now that I think of it, I use it in that way too. If I don't have time to jump into the review at that moment, I kinda glance at the ratings to see more or less what they thought. If high or mediocre, I know I did good and I read it when I get a chance. If ridiculously low, I'll pull over and read... 

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Courtney from the Midwest is reading Monkey: A Journey to the West and a thousand college textbooks August 18, 2012 - 9:17pm

Jumping off what Renee said, I think it can be really helpful if you know the reviewer. Everyone has a different scale for the stars. Dwayne's scale is skewed from mine -- I usually give the concept at least three if it was fully explored, even if it was a terrible idea. Four if it's authentic. Five if it's complete, well-executed, and authentic -- which, to me, means that it could be a vampire story written in a new way that makes it seem original.

I try so hard to be unbiased in the workshop that when I rate concept, the factors are usually whether it's a fully fleshed out idea and whether it's authentic. I've given some truly terrible stories -- a subjective feeling on my part -- fours and fives because they explored the idea as far as it could be done and were truly original.

Then there are some stories that had ideas that I loved, absolutely adored, but gave a one or two because I've seen it so many goddamn times -- from that writer or in general. If this is the seventh time you've written about person one having a secret and person two finding it out, then reacting somehow, I'll give it a one even if it's the coolest idea ever. And if you write a full story but leave an entire plotline unfinished, I'll give it a bad rating.

I try really, really hard to be unbiased. I think people (myself included, when I was new) are really afraid to submit stories that aren't horror, noir, transgressive, subversive, or similar to those genres. I forced myself to use my fifteen free points for a terrible journal extract that was lifeless and about feelings and emotion so that I'd get over it, but a lot of people don't. I don't really want to read your romance stories, your Edward Cullen fanfiction, but if I can help you improve it in a way that stays true to what you've written, I'll do it. And I'll try my damndest to not let my personal preferences get in the way.

That's the problem with the stars -- I can't tell every reviewee how I use the star system so they understand. But once I've reviewed you a couple of times, it starts to make sense, and the stars actually mean something.

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Michael J. Riser from CA, TX, Japan, back to CA is reading The Tyrant - Michael Cisco, The Devil Takes You Home - Gabino Iglesias August 18, 2012 - 10:25pm

My argument wasn't that the star system is subjective but that it has no real context. I can't really use it as a guideline because everyone uses it differently and because the number of stars you get doesn't really tell you anything of substance, as I so poorly explained above. So yeah, I get the subjectivity of every review, but the stars are even less useful because they're not only subjective but also devoid of context. Without the person to explain their standpoint in more detail, I don't find the stars useful. Once I've read a review, then I can glance at the stars and remember where the person stood, but until then... meh.

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Hector Acosta from Dallas is reading Fletch August 19, 2012 - 6:19am

Then there are some stories that had ideas that I loved, absolutely adored, but gave a one or two because I've seen it so many goddamn times -- from that writer or in general. If this is the seventh time you've written about person one having a secret and person two finding it out, then reacting somehow, I'll give it a one even if it's the coolest idea ever

That's kind of where I struggle when I'm giving star ratings. Unless it's a second draft, shouldn't you judge every story solely on its own? 

I'm very aware of the fact that I rarely stray for my genre of choice. It's not because I'm scared, it's simply because that's what I enjoy writing and the stories that normally come out of me.  Should I automatically get a lower star rating because it's my third noir story?

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Arkadia from Australia is reading Selected Poems by W.H. Auden August 19, 2012 - 7:33am

I'm also not sure if I agree with the idea of giving something a one star because a writer is exploring a particular theme. I know I get fixated on particular subjects for extended periods of time and write about that subject from all different angles, and I assume others do too. I do think each story should be judged on its own merits - what it always comes down to for me is two things: was it enjoyable and is it publishable. By that I mean, did I genuinely enjoy reading the story? Would I recommend it to friends? If yes, then yeah, it's enjoyable. By is it publishable I mean, does the author have a sound grasp of the fundamentals? Is their grammar, dialogue, character development, plot progression written at an adequate level? If those two together work for me, then I couldn't care less about anything else. If I enjoyed it it means I didn't just waste my time reading it. That means everything to me. Not to say I don't roll my eyes when I come across yet another zombie story, but hey, often I'm surprised. And that's awesome.

Concerning the star rating itself - while I do think the star descriptions could use a little tweaking for the sake of clarity and parity between ratings, I think it's passable at is. I enjoy seeing things 'at a glance', both when looking at reviews on my own work and on other's. If someone gives me a 4 star rating but a glowing review, I'll just assume that the story just didn't groove on them completely, and that's okay, it's impossible for everyone to love a single thing. If someone adores something it means by default another will hate it. Just the way the world works. And really, I should stop rambling now. Never post on forums during times of sleep deprivation. You will regret it in the morning.

Stop. typing.

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Courtney from the Midwest is reading Monkey: A Journey to the West and a thousand college textbooks August 19, 2012 - 8:50am

Should I automatically get a lower star rating because it's my third noir story?

God, no. I wasn't saying that. Authenticity is doing something that may have been done before in a fresh new way. Look at the novel R. Moon is shopping at the moment -- it may not be the most unique idea, but it's thrillingly authentic. I've only reviewed one of your stories -- doing the second part today, by the way -- but if you had another story that was noir in the workshop, that wouldn't damage my concept rating. I'd lower my rating if it had the same plot as this one, though.

Themes are the same way. If you can tell a story with the same theme as your last one in a new way, go for it. If I've seen it before but I'm still enthralled, you've probably done it in a way that's fresh enough that I'll give you a good rating on concept.

But see? Everyone has different criteria for their star ratings and I can't tell every person I review my process. I try to say "I rated your concept this low because I thought that you didn't explore the idea," but until they've been reviewed by me a few times, they'll need to read the review to figure out what the stars actually mean.

I mean, in almost any case, a four-star review is great for me. I think of it like an A-.

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JEFFREY GRANT BARR from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life August 19, 2012 - 7:30pm

What novel is R. Moon working on? I still remmeber his short story from an earlier workshop review and it was fucking rad. Is it in the workshop? 

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Courtney from the Midwest is reading Monkey: A Journey to the West and a thousand college textbooks August 19, 2012 - 8:10pm

It's called The Naomi Pick-up. The chapters I've reviewed are all still in the workshop, plus a revised one that I'm reviewing tomorrow. It's so fucking good.

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun August 19, 2012 - 11:18pm

I'll just toss this in because stars aren't going anywhere anytime soon. We know that some people don't see much of a use for them but some people do and a lot of people love them. I have always found them to be particularly useful for someone to get a general idea of the overall opinion on a story. Someone can write 1,000 words giving you a helpful critique, but at the end, you still might not be clear on if something worked for them, as a reader.

If you don't see any value to that, as writer or a reader, I won't argue with you and tell you you're wrong. Rather, I would make the suggestion that you simply begin your critiques with someone like "Note to author: I don't feel that rating your story actually helps with the writing process and therefore, do not read into the stars I have assigned".

Additionally, if you fear that someone might get "get upset that I gave them a four instead of five" perhaps you can take a moment to actually explain to them why you lowered the rating. In fact, maybe even go so far as to defining a personal rating system that you can copy/paste into your review? I've always been a fan of this breakdown

1 star - needs a lot of work, consider doing major revisions
2 stars - needs a lot of work but has fundamental elements worth chasing
3 stars - off to a great start and has potential but needs work
4 stars - very good, has a few minor things that need to be addressed
5 stars - great and polished, I see no reason you can't send this out to publishers

So maybe make your own criteria and just copy/paste it into the end of your review? I'm sure the author would find it helpful and it might help you feel more confident in your scoring.

In a previous version of the workshop, star ratings were optional. I can assure you that we got far more comments saying they should be mandatory than we now get of people requesting they shouldn't be.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. August 20, 2012 - 1:30pm

I give that post 5 stars across the board.

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Stacy Kear from Bucyrus, Ohio lives in New Jersey is reading The Art of War August 20, 2012 - 5:25pm

I like seeing stars, they are pretty and sparkly. If you don't get enough stars for your Mom to put your story on the fridge, work harder. When you accumulate 100 stars you get to pick a prize out of the surprise bag. I am hoping for a troll to put on my pencil eraser. Smelly stickers are a close second though. 

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Sound from Azusa, CA is reading Greener Pastures by Michael Wehunt August 20, 2012 - 8:35pm

Stacy, I don't think those are the kinds of stars we're talking about. 

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Courtney from the Midwest is reading Monkey: A Journey to the West and a thousand college textbooks August 20, 2012 - 9:05pm

We aren't? Fuck.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. August 20, 2012 - 9:21pm

Fuck, I miss scratch and sniff stickers.  

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Stacy Kear from Bucyrus, Ohio lives in New Jersey is reading The Art of War August 21, 2012 - 5:07am

Let me translate Sound

I like stars ~ I like to see at a glance the general consensus of how my story was viewed

If it's not good enough for the fridge ~ you need to work on the story

Pick from the prize bag ~ the stars have whatever, if any, meaning you assign them

Troll pencil tops and smelly stickers ~ I just like em

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated August 21, 2012 - 6:39am

I'd like it if that was made offical, posted all over the writer's workshop. Or any set standard.

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Kirk from Pingree Grove, IL is reading The Book Of The New Sun August 21, 2012 - 10:13am

I'm willing to figure out a way to include a suggested standard in the workshop if you guys are willing to provide some feedback on what you think makes the most sense.

I prefer something simple and encouraging.

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fport from Canada is reading The World Until Yesterday - Jared Diamond November 16, 2012 - 6:27pm

@kirk: from the cheap seats. My trepidation about the star rating was centered on the fact that it wasn't a standard it seemed so subjective and so individual. But, with a legend like the one you provide then the stars mean more and I can feel more confident about assigning them.

1 star - needs a lot of work, consider doing major revisions
2 stars - needs a lot of work but has fundamental elements worth chasing
3 stars - off to a great start and has potential but needs work
4 stars - very good, has a few minor things that need to be addressed
5 stars - great and polished, I see no reason you can't send this out to publishers

You can explain the stars and how they came about in the body of the review. The only other thing to do is to make sure the star categories are the ones that will do the most for the writer's development.

Concept                                                                                                                                    Structure                                                                                                                                        Characters                                                                                                                                          Dialogue

And that they each have a definition that can be followed confidently.

Of course if there is a faq I have totally missed, a pointer will be all that is necessary.

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated November 18, 2012 - 6:13pm

Maybe simpler?

1 - Very bad, not sure it is worth your time to do more work on this.

2 - Bad, needs lots more work.

3 - Average, needs more work.

4 - Good, more work could help.

5 - Very good, doesn't need much more work if any.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. November 18, 2012 - 2:49pm

How about

1: Reads like a first draft.  

2: Reads like a second draft that hasn't been workshopped.

3: Reads like a second draft that has been workshopped.

4: Reads like a third draft that have been workshopped.

5: Reads like publishable material.  

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Stacy Kear from Bucyrus, Ohio lives in New Jersey is reading The Art of War November 18, 2012 - 2:53pm

Did you guys not see my above system? It's brilliant and you get prizes. ;-)

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Dwayne from Cincinnati, Ohio (suburbs) is reading books that rotate to often to keep this updated November 18, 2012 - 6:15pm

Dear Stacy

We did indeed see your system above, but unfortunately there are serious issues that at this time prevent us from moving forth.

In this time of cut backs who are you suggesting pays for the fridge, the Mom to put them up, the surprise bag, the surprises to go into the bad, and various transpiration/storage costs? I think I speak for the group when I say there isn't money handy for this. Also, we aren't certain that it is ethical to have someone be a mother for hire. We would need need more information on the proposed position of 'Mom to put them up'.

Your rate of stars to prize exchange means a writer gets to pick out of the bag once every 45 stories (assuming they received a average rating 2.5 stars which would result from a equal distribution of stars in the 1 through 5 brackets). Since most of these costs are not effected by how often someone picks a prize it doesn't work towards cost savings and seems less then ideally motivating.

Due to the above listed reasons we are not able to treat you idea as serious, regardless of it being 'brilliant and you get prizes'. Please note I do not concede those points as being true since I haven't taken the time to examine them, simply not relevant to the point I am making.

If you can raise funding, perhaps through http://www.kickstarter.com please revise your proposal and let us know.

 

sincerely

Dwayne

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Stacy Kear from Bucyrus, Ohio lives in New Jersey is reading The Art of War November 18, 2012 - 5:41pm

Dang it Dwayne. 

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PandaMask from Los Angeles is reading More Than Human November 18, 2012 - 6:01pm

I like the star rating system. It gives you an overall of how well recieved your story was. You can or can't take it seriously, it's up to the person. I think the crtiques (lbl or comment) are the core of it.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading East of Eden. Steinbeck is FUCKING AMAZING. November 19, 2012 - 5:51am

I like it, too.  Stars are pretty.