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cshultz81 from Oklahoma is reading Men and Cartoons by Jonathan Lethem June 20, 2012 - 12:49pm

Hello fellow LitReactorers,

I've submitted two stories to the workshop now, and in turn I've received thoughtful, helpful reviews that have improved the quality of both pieces. I don't want to disparage the reviewers or the advice they've given me or to appear ungrateful, but I have noticed I tend to only get two or three reviews for my submissions, where other users receive them in the double digits. It's not a number-of-friends issue, because most of them have as many friends here as I do. 

Again, not complaining. I'd just like to know what I can do to reach out to more worshop participants so as to get a broader spectrum of viewpoints. I'm trying to increase my own presence and critique more submissions. My schedule makes this difficult, but it's worth it to be a part of this wonderful service. 

Thoughts? Suggestions? Chants? Potions? Any ideas are welcome.

Thanks,

Chris 

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Matt Attack from Richmond, Va. is reading As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner June 20, 2012 - 12:55pm

Start here

 

I created a thread for getting attention for your submissions long, long ago. LINK

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ReneeAPickup from Joshua Tree, CA is reading The Sound of Lonliness June 20, 2012 - 12:55pm

The ones in the double digits tend to not be all reviews, but comments and discussion on the reviews that were given--so they probably had more reviews than 2-3, but not quite as many as the 15 showing.

Anyway, I've found that reviewing and participating in the forums has brought me reviews. There is also a worskhop whoring thread around here somewhere, where people are encouraged to post a link to their story if it's been sitting, lonely in the workshop.

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading Comic books and motorcycle riding guides June 20, 2012 - 1:06pm

Also, don't feel shy about sending a PM to someone you really want a review from, especially if they are interested in your style/genre of writing.

And size matters - shorter stories got more reviews.  If I can knock one out in an hour or two, then I'm more likely to do that then anything over 2,500 words.  If you have a long piece, break it into parts.

Summer seems to have taken over the lives of a lot of reviewers.  In the winter, there's just more time for doing reviews for me.

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 20, 2012 - 1:07pm

I always think 5 is a good number.  If you get 5 good reviews, then life is good. 

I might review for you tonight.  Like how I made that sound like a HUGE favor???  Sorry.  I just meant, since you made a thread and all...

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading Comic books and motorcycle riding guides June 20, 2012 - 1:10pm

Careful with Avery, though.  She just puts in comments on the side insulting your manhood for the whole story.  You're a pussy.  You can't get it up.  What's the matter, crybaby?  I've got a bigger clit than you do dick.  

She's mean but fair, but also very proud of her clitoris.  

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Matt Attack from Richmond, Va. is reading As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner June 20, 2012 - 1:12pm

Yeah. I don't think he knows what's in store for him with this "favor"

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Constant Reader from Central OR is reading Nothing but fucking Shakespeare, for the rest of my life June 20, 2012 - 1:13pm

It's because people are lazy. Also, try posting a bazillion random things to the forums, laugh at the stupid memes, and you'll get way more reviews.

Of course, the new trend is no LBLs, so take your 4 line review saying 'omgz since i once also was a vampyre, this really speeks to me! This review is about me and not your story so of course i want to reed more of your urban fantasy romanze!'. Take it, and like it. 

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 20, 2012 - 1:17pm

Hahaha!  Howie is just bitter over that penis critique I gave him. 

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Matt Attack from Richmond, Va. is reading As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner June 20, 2012 - 1:19pm

Hahaha!  Howie is just bitter over that penis critique I gave him."

I feel this would be better if you added "like a god damn idiot" to it. 

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading Comic books and motorcycle riding guides June 20, 2012 - 1:19pm

It was the pictures proving it true that really bothered me.  You've got amazing genitalia, but there's no need to rub it in.

That came out wrong.

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 20, 2012 - 1:20pm

I just assumed that when he sent the picture, he wanted a review.  I think I was fair. 

 

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Matt Attack from Richmond, Va. is reading As I Lay Dying, William Faulkner June 20, 2012 - 1:20pm

but there's no need to rub it in."

BA-ZING! 

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cshultz81 from Oklahoma is reading Men and Cartoons by Jonathan Lethem June 20, 2012 - 2:42pm

Well, this thread went to some interesting places.

Thanks for all the comments (and visuals). I figured ramping up my own participation was a good strategy. I've noticed the lack of LBLs, which is okay by me - I often struggle with those myself. A few paragraphs of comments seems to suit the process nicely. 

Incidentally, I have no inordinate qualms with genitlia or images thereof. You know, just saying. 

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 20, 2012 - 2:53pm

" I have no inordinate qualms with genitlia or images thereof. You know, just saying."

Howie, this is your cue!

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading Comic books and motorcycle riding guides June 20, 2012 - 3:00pm

Sent.

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GaryP from Denver is reading a bit of this and that June 20, 2012 - 3:09pm

And, genitalia aside (for now), I looked back at your submission, and I think you got caught in the middle of a whole bunch of submissions. The workshop got deluged and I'm seeing several "1 Review" submissions that are farther down on the list (thus not easily seen).

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Utah from Fort Worth, TX is reading Lonesome Dove by Larry McMurtry June 20, 2012 - 7:29pm

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Howie, I would never remove a photo of your genitalia.

Chris, would you think it was weird in a face to face conversation if you said, "I'd like more reviews," and Howie pulled down his pants and showed you his rooster?

Because that seems like a perfectly natural progression to me.

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 20, 2012 - 7:37pm

His rooster?

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PandaMask from Los Angeles is reading More Than Human June 20, 2012 - 7:48pm

Cockerspaniel

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bryanhowie from FW, ID is reading Comic books and motorcycle riding guides June 20, 2012 - 8:41pm

Vlad the Impaler?

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PandaMask from Los Angeles is reading More Than Human June 20, 2012 - 9:31pm

Genghis Cock

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cshultz81 from Oklahoma is reading Men and Cartoons by Jonathan Lethem June 21, 2012 - 5:30am

Utah: I guess it would depend on how many drinks had been consumed, though I'm trying to imagine under what context Howie's Liam Galagher is a 'review'. Unless we're talking All-Male Review, then I see it.

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averydoll from Kentucky is reading Lisey's Story by Stephen King June 21, 2012 - 7:42am

Yikes.  I completely forgot to do a review...

the week is young!  How do you feel about Friday night?  Want to spend it whatever way you want while I stay home and read your dumb surely brilliant story?