I enjoyed both stories! I went with Sweet Meats because I saw the "twist" in Phantom pretty early on, and that sucked a bit of the tension out for me. But as far as the writing itself is concerned, both stories represented themselves well. Vote counts aren't representative of overall quality here, IMHO.
That said, congrats Dino! Your reveal at the end was unexpected, and you earned it with solid writing. Suddenly I'm really.... hungry.
Yeah, I couldn't figure out how to make it more....um....surprising, I guess, as in, it wasn't too obvious. Either way, Dino, you blew me away dude. It was a good un. We'll have to have a rematch soon!
Thank you to everyone who took the time and read our stuff. If you want a Thunderdome, hit me up, or put in an offical request in the thunderdome thread and it'll be ON!
